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WinterSoul
June 23rd,2002, 12:10 PM
Nine they have always been
Shadows in our darkest dreams
Ringwraiths, Nazgul
Malevolent entities
Nor living nor dead

Black Riders
All of whom even wizards fear
Evil servants of Sauron
Dark Lord in Barad Dur

Once the whole were kings
Fair and mighty
Great leaders of mortal men
In the lands of Middle Earth

Alas!
Human hearts are weak

Their lives they gave away
For they were vain

Driven by lust for power
All fell one by one

Now - Corrupted minds
Blackened souls
Shadows

Eternally bound in the dark power
Of an ever searching eye
That soon will gaze and see
The One

Master ring

In the Dark Tower
A horrid voice will resound
“We will bring the One”

Then all will ride
To lands of free
Seek that which in evil hand
Must never be

Beregond
June 25th,2002, 09:21 PM
Yay. Another great poem. "Resound"- that's a really cool word. The last two stanzas are my favorites. Keep up the good work.

WinterSoul
June 26th,2002, 11:22 AM
Sure will !
:) :) :)
THANX
......if you have suggestions shoot em out !
i can always change it to a better peom
:)

Beregond
June 26th,2002, 03:30 PM
I'm not a very good poet so if I tried to do anything to it, I'd probably ruin it.

PrinceImrahil
June 26th,2002, 11:36 PM
Jeez we have somw good poets on this site. Another hit here, Good job Man!

WinterSoul
June 26th,2002, 11:42 PM
Well thank you !
Glad you bothered to read it :)

Fatty
June 27th,2002, 12:02 AM
A I said to you before nice work.......yes you are an artistic bunch. Good to see. :-)

WinterSoul
June 27th,2002, 12:14 AM
i'm doing this for i love the site and your work Fatty ! :)

Gil-Galad
June 28th,2002, 12:01 AM
Great poem. You are the best poet ive seen in a long time wintersoul. Ive been inspired to write an un ryming poem!

Good show!

WinterSoul
June 28th,2002, 12:24 AM
I'm really flattered Gil.
You are not bad yourself. Very Good Actually !
Inspired>>>>GREAT! Shout it out when the poem is ready. I'll be the first to comment :)

Gil-Galad
June 28th,2002, 01:10 AM
/me shouts*

It is fineshed!