A poem on a great time

[ridnarhti_M]

Glorious

For seven drunken days and seven luscious nights
all filled with burning love and teasing little bites,
with bodies sweaty bright from lovers' tender fights,
deep hidden in a cave just lit by candlelight:

I'll carry you to hell
the place we both know well
and this much i can tell,
My God.... I love your smell.

I'll hope we fly to heaven,
those days and nights all seven,
because... but for addiction,
Hell too is just a fiction

But if there were a hell,
God knows, but who can tell,
I would stand up and yell:
"My Precious..you are swell!"

Deep hidden in a cave nothing will stop the tide
skin softly touching skin, your eyes so green and bright
I'll cover you in velvet to ban the chill of night
and if we'd ever part, please, Precious, without spite.
2002-10-20

[Beleglotiel]

Nice, ridnarhti_M, very good. I like!

[ridnarhti_M]

I am glad you like my poem, I like yours too. Though of course yours is real LotR and mine only contains the word Precious twice. :-]

[Beleglotiel]

Close enough! ;)

[Tar-Ancalimë]

jeez ridn :rolleyes:lol j/k

hmmm very... corrupting ;) tho I really wouldn't know what you are talking about *looks angelic* (yes, that look again...)

buuuuuuuuuuuuut no i don't like it...
feel free to attack my pathetic naive shell anytime you like :angel:

but, anyway, come on, if you take a look at the other poems, this one does stand out a little :rolleyes: (and of course I notice my poem doens't even get a single notice from you... i DID scare you off, I knew it ;) j/k)

[Catz]

well i like it....and theres no reason why it should be like all the others is there?
i like the images a lot.....
:catz:

[Tar-Ancalimë]

you would catz :rolleyes:

im kidding, you know i am... im just taking a few liberties here with ridn cause im pretty positive he knows me well enough ;)

[ridnarhti_M]

You ladies, fight it out if you wish, but if any of you could tell me where I can find all those nice smileys and ani-giffies, I will use more of them, to counter Tar-Ancalime's 'angelic' look. They might be a great enhancement to my Riddles too, which I intend to turn into a series, with real scoring charts and all, AND.... a prize at the end of each month. The rules I will explain in an other post

[Beleglotiel]

Sounds cool.

[Tar-Ancalimë]

ridn... hit the "post reply" button... on the left, there is a menu of smilies... there's a whole ton, if you want to see them all, click on "Get More" :angel:

dang ridn you have no life any more than i do!! lol j/k

[ridnarhti_M]

here's another poem i wrote ( i was 12 when i did it in my own language (44 years ago now :jester: )

** RatRace **

Mankind is mad, mankind is nuts,
Most humans are just fools. And why?
They smiling,stuffed and drugged and drunk
Race till the day they die.
:
ekhnaton 2002-0914-001
(another nick of me)