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Lady Ashley
November 2nd,2002, 08:20 AM
Inspired by a lovely line by the Lady of Lorien, I present this!

The Tides of Fate

The tides of fate are flowing
The Elven ring is glowing
Ever on, ever on
Until the night is gone.

The river ebbs, the river flows
On and on it goes
Until it meets that larger way
On past end of day.

The tides of fate are flowing
The Star and Ring are glowing
Ever on, ever on
Even when the Deed is done.

The Dark will near
The good will fight for what is dear
For grass and flower,
City and Tower.

The tides of fates are flowing;
The elven-ring is going
Ever on, ever on,
Until the ship is gone.

:elfqueen:

Tar-Ancalimė
November 2nd,2002, 05:25 PM
oooh goosebumps :grin:

very very lovely... I especially like the last stanza, and how your poem reflects the quest as a whole, and how continuous it is :)

Elewen
November 2nd,2002, 05:37 PM
v v v v fab!!!!

Nessa the Dancer
November 2nd,2002, 08:05 PM
Wonderful!! You know it almost fits to the theme of Greensleaves.

Sindarin
November 3rd,2002, 06:07 PM
Wonderful. It's a lovely poem. :)

Isiltįri
November 11th,2002, 12:16 AM
Lady Ashley, I love this one!!!!!!!!!! :thumbs: