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Beleglotiel
November 11th,2002, 01:46 AM
This poem is dedicated to Ridn.
Dear Ridn,
I hope this helps.

A broken heart,
What no one wants,
A broken heart,
Is what all fear,
When it comes,
A tear follows,

A broken heart,
Is rarely fixed,
A broken heart,
Cannot be stopped,
When is comes,
Depression follows,

A broken heart,
Brings nothing good,
A broken heart,
Is never good,
When it comes,
A bond grows stronger,
Between friends who help,
Between friends who try,
To fix what cannot be fixed.

A! Elbereth
November 11th,2002, 01:47 AM
Awwww this is sweet - and true! I love it, and I could relate! Wonderful :grin: :thumbs:

Beleglotiel
November 11th,2002, 01:49 AM
Thank you.

ridnarhti_M
November 11th,2002, 01:51 AM
:jester:

Great poem, thanks for it Beleglotiel, but some hearts DO heal.
You are a great heart and a good friend
:jester:

Beleglotiel
November 11th,2002, 01:52 AM
Thank you

Sindarin
November 16th,2002, 06:40 AM
That's really beautiful, Beleglotiel. Such a nice poem.

Beleglotiel
November 16th,2002, 11:58 AM
Thank you all!