Elrond

[Gil-Galad]

Well this is my last rhyming poem for a while, seeing that you guys are probaly sick of them, they just keep coming to me.It is pretty bad, but i feel likeposting it.

An elflord who is wise
An elflord who has seen many a sunrise
An elflord who is strong
An elflord eyes see long

He was half man
Then the gods came up with a plan
They turned him into an elf
And then he got to know himself

He was given one of the three
and he used it to make elves happy
Then sauron came with his unmesuarable might
And the chose not to submit but to fight

The elves joined a band
And with him he left this
What became of them i cannot say
That is the story for another day

[PrinceImrahil]

I like the hair is long part.
Mainly cause it make almost no sense.

Make elves "happy" huh...
Like Celebrian for example.

[Gil-Galad]

i said it wasnt very good

[A! Elbereth]

I like all of it but the first stanza could use a change in a few words..... I'm not good enough a poet to know what...

[WinterSoul]

it's good
Sense is not always important

Here the GREETZ go to GIL for he [once again] maintained the rhyming throughout the whole poem
And you know what i like the first stanza and i think it is one of the best. So what there is repeating of words .

CONGRATS GIL-GALAD!
You mighty elven king !