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Mark Tierney
January 5th,2003, 04:23 PM
Note:
This story is set in the year 1049-1050 of the Third Age. As a result, Minas Tirith is still called Minas Anor, and Minas Morgul is still a fortress of Gondor, Minas Ithil. The fortress of Umbar is also in Gondorian hands, though under siege from Haradrim and Black Numenoreans. Mirkwood is still Greenwood the Great and the Istari have only just arrived in Middle Earth.
If anyone can provide me with any more information on this part of the history of Middle Earth, please post it below, together with your opinions on the story so far.
Many of the characters are of course the property of JRR Tolkien and his estate.


Chapter 1 – The Siege of Umbar

Minardir looked out from his hiding place at the top of the cutting onto the road below. He could see the long, spindly line of Haradrim cavalry, just a couple of hundred yards away, blissfully unaware of their imminent destruction. The Gondorian captain signalled to his company of rangers to make ready, the impersonation of an owl almost indistinguishable from that of nature. He eased his own longbow forward and eased an arrow onto the string. He looked at the Haradrim again, and saw that it was time. He shouted the commands.

“Company! Draw! Loose!” The arrows of his men came flying from the bushes and thickets all over the cutting. Minardir released his own arrow, and saw it hit one of the lead Haradrim in the throat. The men of Gondor continued to fire into the Southrons, and by now most of the enemy had been felled by the deadly black-and-white-fletched arrows.

The commander of the Southrons attempted to recover his troops, and lead a charge up the cutting, but the bank was too steep, and the remainder of the enemy perished. Minardir made a final signal, and the Gondorians faded away into the trees.

The rangers regrouped a few miles away, closer to the coast, and rested there for the night. Minardir set a heavy guard, for they were in enemy territory, and it was still possible that they might be found. In the first light of dawn, they packed up their camp and marched to the coast, where they were met by the warship Dol Amroth, which would take them back to the fortress of Umbar. It was less than a days journey, and passed without event. The captain of the ship, a hard man in middle age named Berlond, summoned Minardir to his chamber to speak with him. The Captain of the Rangers of Umbar cast an impressive appearance to Berlond. He had long, dark hair with a growth of stubble on his chin and upper lip. He was tall, but not broad shouldered, and his eyes had the glimmerings of intelligence, wit and charm. He, like his men wore a lighter version of the heavy armour utilised by all the armies of Gondor, as well as a hooded, forest green cloak. On his shoulder he carried a well-made Gondorian longbow and at his side a sword of the finest balance and construction. He was of one of the great Numenorean families, who resided in northern Gondor, and were said to have great friendship with elves of the Greenwood.
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Elven Daughter
January 5th,2003, 05:37 PM
I like it so far, continue soon!

Mark Tierney
January 6th,2003, 08:35 PM
Her's some more!

Berlond rose. “It is good to see you, my old friend,” he said. “How went your raid.”

“It is good to see you too, Berlond,” replied Minardir, “As to my raid, it went well. One less company for the Haradrim to throw against the walls of Umbar, anyway.” He continued, “My men performed as expected – and once again our tactics allowed us to escape without loss.”

“That is good,” replied Berlond. “The news will be well received in the fortress; they need every man available to defend the walls. The Southrons are pushing hard.” He went on, “Rumour has it they have a new captain. A Black Numenorean.”

“I also have heard this rumour,” said Minardir, “and believe it may be more than that.” However, my main concern now is reassessing the situation in Umbar and returning to Minas Anor to report to king .“

The two men spent the rest of the voyage exchanging tales and news of friends, family and events in their separate lives. They drew into the havens of Umbar early in the evening, and the two men temporarily said their goodbyes, until Minardir would return to take passage to Pelargir.

Minardir and his company marched off to their accommodation in the city.

Pil
January 9th,2003, 09:40 PM
This is really grest writing Mark, so original as it's set in a time in which not many fanfics are set.

This has really got me curious....please post more soon! :)

Mark Tierney
January 11th,2003, 11:20 PM
Later on that night, Minardir looked out across the Haradwaith, over the walls of the city, reflecting on what he had seen. The situation was stable, and the people had no chance of starving, but equally the siege did not look like it would be broken soon, and more Southrons were arriving every day, despite the valiant efforts of him and his men. As he watched the flickering campfires of the enemy encampment, he deliberated on how big a force he would need to relieve the city. More than he could estimate, the Haradrim settlement stretched for what seemed like miles. He took one final gaze at the endless plains, and returned to his quarters, ready to sleep.

The next morning, he rose and dressed at the crack of dawn, and made his way through the city to the docks, after leaving his lieutenant, Arathor, in command of the rangers, who would remain to bolster the garrison of the city. Over the past few months, fewer reinforcements had been arriving, and Minardir made a note to ask the king why when he arrived at Minas Anor. He reached the docks and was greeted by Berlond, and they boarded the ship, ready to set sail.

Bess the Bard
January 12th,2003, 04:58 AM
I like imagining what this early part of the Third Age was like, so I am interested in your story. I like the military strategy aspect and hope we'll see some of the political intrigue of this era. I'm looking forward to more. Good writing!

Gatsby
January 13th,2003, 02:03 AM
it's really neat... and like everyone else, i'm looking froward to reading more... very good writing style
out
gatsby

Pil
January 23rd,2003, 10:21 PM
Keeping this up in on the page...:)

Can we be expecting an update Mark? :huh: :p

Bess the Bard
January 24th,2003, 04:06 AM
I hope so. This is far too promising a beginning to allow to languish. I'd really like to see more, Mark!