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WinterSoul
June 28th,2002, 11:28 PM
THE BIGINNING OF THE FELLOWSHIP


This not really a poem to me but i like it and intend to continue it. Hope you don't find it dull

Here is :

Fortress of light noble and pure
Shining bright even in the darkest night

Last homely house in the lands east of the sea
Where waters flow free and birds sing to thee:

Here is the house of Elrond
A wise and mighty Elf-Lord
Born at the Havens of Sirion
Son of Earendil and Elwing

Then the waters will whisper:

The deeply cut valley of peace
Will ease your pain and drown your sorrow
For that’s the place where wisdom is

An important mission led a company here
Great perils they had passed
To bring something evil in this land
Seeking the counsel of the wise

And the loss of a dear one
Was almost at hand
For evil magic was making its way
Freezing an innocent heart

But the hobbit was not like you and me
He did not subdue to the evil purpose
Of the Morgul blade

The Master of Rivendell
Found the broken part
And in the hot fire it was cast
Thus Frodo endured and recovered at last

Here in Rivendell a council took place
Deciding the fate of the peoples of Middle Earth
And what shall be of the great threat to all who are free

THE MASTER RING



<to be continued>

A! Elbereth
June 28th,2002, 11:49 PM
I love it! You use great description of Rivendell and what happened there! Post as soon as it is continued! I look forward to seeing the rest!

WinterSoul
June 29th,2002, 12:09 AM
Thanx !
will do my best to make the second part even better

Gil-Galad
June 29th,2002, 01:29 AM
Its so good! I love it! Write more! Write more!

Well im inspired to writhe another poem

WinterSoul
June 29th,2002, 01:33 AM
I am a fan of yours you are a fan of mine
can't get better !
I'll say the same thing to you "WRITE MORE , WRITE MORE " ! :)

Gil-Galad
June 29th,2002, 01:36 AM
lol

One more thing, clean out your mailbox. I pm ed you and its full! Delete some stuff!

A! Elbereth
June 29th,2002, 01:37 AM
Yes I agree... I have to say you inspired me too and I wrote 3 more poems... but I wont post them becuase you guys are doing a great job without mine! So I entered them on poety.com

WinterSoul
June 29th,2002, 01:42 AM
poety.com
what kind of place is that ?

okay gil i'll empty my mailbox :)

A! Elbereth
June 29th,2002, 01:48 AM
oops i meant Poetry.com

Its obviously a place where poets can submit their poetry and win prizes! once I won the $1,000 contest and my poem was published in a book!

I put the poem in the poets section but took it out when i realized this is a LOTR site and it should have LOTR things in it. But every month I submit about 30 poems. I'm kinda one of those overly-emotional people...

WinterSoul
June 29th,2002, 02:01 AM
yes i knew it was poetry.com but wasn't sure
oh great job!
1000 for a poem
Excellent!
i might give it a try also
do you think i have any chances to win ?
at least 3rd prize?:)

A! Elbereth
June 29th,2002, 05:34 AM
Sure! I didnt think I would win becuase they said 6 million enter every month! But I'd say there is a good chance! Your poem is to the best of my liking and I'm sure anyone else who reads it

WinterSoul
July 1st,2002, 10:49 AM
thanx
i'm said to say this guys but i am having difficulties and probably will desert this forum for a while [for now maybe till the end of the month]
i will talk to Illu and Fatty about it.
Hope to see you soon
This story or call it a poem if you like is likely to stay without a sequel for a while
SORRY TO LEAVE BUT I HAVE TO !