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Moraneah
January 12th,2003, 12:45 AM
In the land of mordor the mistic evil lies
to gain its place in awful nature
and keep its name alive.
I seek to find the mystery
of how it came to be
that this one being can be so faul
and hold the treasures being.
Oh Smaug, dear Smaug, tis fair
for thy treasures are here.
Give me of them if you would
and I will let thee live.
The great one is not asleep,
he sees you in the dark,
but treasure is not yours to keep
and I would get thee out.
Oh Smaug, fair Smaug
this day thou art no more
and of the sence to give thee,
But my life I want more, farewell.

Tar-Ancalimë
January 12th,2003, 05:08 AM
hey this is a great poem! i enjoyed reading it and the images you present are really intriguing :)

thanks for putting it here

but a little question, are you saying Smaug lives in Mordor or did i misread the first line?