The Balrog

[Gil-Galad]

A Deamon of Terror from anceint days
Who was corrupted by an evil god
They left the light, fled to the dark
And never looked back

Creatures of fire and darkness
With wings to blot out the light around them
A sword and whip of flame in their hands

They commanded the forces of Melkor
Helping to blot out the light in middle earth
They beat back ulgulliot
And saved their evil master

In the war of wrath
They fought the force of Valinor
But in the end they lost
And were forced to flea

One was awakened in the black pit
When the dwarves went to deep
He wreked their kingdom
Killed their leader
And made them flea

It was awakened one more time
When nine came into its halls
It was beaten down by a wizard
And forced to leave the mortal plane

[WinterSoul]

wooooow Gil man!
You are a poet.
Good one
i love it.
I am sad that i won't be albe to enjoy your work for a while.
I'll be leaving this Tolkine realm till the end of the month at least.
Some probs came up.
For more info contact Illu. I have also told Mirkgirl a good deal.

I'll miss your poems
Hope to be back as soon as possible
Meanwhile Keep up the good work and take care.

BYE FOR NOW !

[Gil-Galad]

Bye Wintersould, ill write alot while your away so you can read them when you get back! Ill miss your poems! Bye!

[PrinceImrahil]

Gil that was really good.
I have one suggestion (but I'm no poet so you don't have to listen). In the third stanza I would use the word Morgoth instead of Melkor. I don't know why. Thats just what I'd do.

[Gil-Galad]

It is a good suggestion and i have reviewed it, but it was stuck in commitie.

No, I like it better that way. I tryed it but it wont wrk out for me. Besides, i dont want to be biased in my poetry(ememy of the world). I want to be nice and even, good and evil equall.