Poem for Aragorn

[Quellefalathiel BeX]

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You are watching the
hobbits in Bree
hoping that they
do not have the evil
that you know they have
you take one into
your room and
try to instill fear in them
and then you accompany
them to Imlardis
your bravery
your heritage
they know not
while at Helm's Deep
you show everyone what
you are made of
willing to sacrifice it all
for Arda

[Tar-Ancalimë]

oooh... i like this poem. i usually dont enjoy free verse, but this was good. short, gets your point across, and pithy. i enjoyed reading it and i hope to see more from you! :)

one thing... you might want to close your html tags while theres still time to edit it...but just imagining what that would look like... gives me a profound headache... so its better if you dont, please :)

[Elentari]

Thank you for sharing your poem; it gives us a 'feel' for Aragorn; his strength and his heart!

Respectfully,
Elentari

[Nessa the Dancer]

Yes, I like it. I didn't on the first reading, I supose because I'm used to the free-verse. But after reading it a couple of times, I think it's really good, and shows Aragorn's character.
Very good :thumbs:

[Elleth]

Very good!:thumbs:

[Black Rider]

free verse is great! i can't rhyme for my life, that's why i like it. good job :thumbs: