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Wilwarin
January 22nd,2003, 11:51 PM
Here is another poem inspired by a picture from my FotR day calendar. The picture is of a row of Elf warriors in the Last Alliance, just before they are atacked by a billion Orcs (I'm sure you've seen it before).


"Elves and Death"

Battle was before them,
Yet no soldier feared the fight.
Though in the forth ensuing mayhem
Each knew that he might die.

The warriors, tall and Elven-fair,
Had all seen death before;
Men who were killed by sword or snare
Over a thousand years or more.

Death was real to the race of men,
They seemed to be born to die;
To live short lives and then to end,
Leaving loved ones behind to cry.

Yet no Elven mind could grasp it,
No immortal heart could tell
The thoughts of a dying soldier,
As he in the battle fell.

© Kathryn H.

Tar-Ancalimë
January 23rd,2003, 03:57 AM
another great poem, wil! i really enjoy reading your poetry. this particular one conveys the emotions behind those hard faces (yes ive seen the pic heh) very well. and i look forward to seeing more by you in the future! :)

Nessa the Dancer
January 23rd,2003, 03:33 PM
Aye!
That is great Wil!
I love your poetry :grin:

Wilwarin
January 23rd,2003, 11:33 PM
Hannad le, to both of you! :grin:

Elbereth
February 1st,2003, 10:57 PM
Don't think I've seen anyone capture an immortal's view of death as well as you did in this poem. (And yes - I do know which picture it is based on and they fit together really well)

Wilwarin
February 2nd,2003, 10:32 PM
Thank you Elbereth!

Windwater Elf
February 11th,2003, 10:21 PM
Precise and poignant, I like it very much.