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The Mystic
July 2nd,2002, 06:23 PM
The One Ring


Cursed and Blessed both at birth,
Destined without a tongue to tell a tale
That writes itself with blood and tears
That has lasted now for far too many years.

Forged in darkened fire
Brooding, thinking, forever dire.
Sauron seeks and Men desire,
In the palm of Gollum, he admires.

Such a simple thing that takes so much,
Little in weight and heavy in blood, that is such.
He who wears it on their finger it will corrupt,
And the lives of all it shall disrupt.

It could have ended long ago and far below,
Deep inside Mordor where the shadows lie.
Cast into the fires it was not,
For it was held by Mortal hands.

Awakened an Evil in Mordor where Shadows lie,
Soon causing heroic Men and great Elves to die.
What darkness looms close, when shall it take me?
How long will it be before it's too late to see?

We brave our hearts, soon sad songs we shall sing,
All because of the of such a simple little thing,
All because of the One Ring.

~ The Mystic ~

Illuvatar
July 2nd,2002, 06:34 PM
Very well done Mystic!! :thumbs:

Well met, and welcome to the community!

Illu

A! Elbereth
July 2nd,2002, 09:30 PM
Breathtaking piece Mystic! I urge you to write more and share it with us!

WinterSoul
July 4th,2002, 03:43 PM
Awesome!
i don't have time to write more else i'll tell you what i like in each and every stanza but i can't now :(
JUST KEEP IT UP !

you are deffinetely a good poet.
this was flawless to me.

The Mystic
July 4th,2002, 09:50 PM
Well my my, thank you, and please when you do have time I will be more than happy to accept any words (both kind and not so kind) on my work. I am an accomplished poet in the past and I am currently writing prose. Remind me to post my fantasy stories here after I get them copyrighted.

~ The Mystic ~

XxEvilHobbit
July 4th,2002, 09:57 PM
Well hunny, itz lookin gr8 to me! lol :roflmao:
u evr think about a published book? u should...
lol, if u want more u know where to find me. *Mwa!

Elentari
July 5th,2002, 04:22 AM
Thank you for sharing your poem; it's wonderful! I hope to hear more from your golden pen in the future............