Comments on Bele's fanfic

[Beleglotiel]

Well, due to a request from a reader I have been informed that I should make a thread strictly for comments about my story (which BTW it's title isn't really 'How We Met', i'm still working on a good one ;) ) and then put all my chapters in the other thread............so, just talk about it in here after you read a chapter ;)

*this was so not my idea* :huh:

[Aldalaire]

Great job Bele! Can't wait to read the next chapter.

[Beleglotiel]

Thanks! Nice to see you here! Finally!

[Aragorn's Latest Lay]

Thank goodness for some extra space.
It's excellent stuff. A darn good read Bele. Reading this standard of work really takes the presure (I have, for some reason forgotten how to spell that) off writing other less worthy morsels (I can still spell that). Keep it up.

A.L.L. :thumbs:

[Beleglotiel]

Why thanks A.L.L. :thumbs:
I always try my best lol It just makes me happy to know that you all like it so much! veryhappy

[Telyhandoiel]

I love it, but I prefer to read it at school in my spare time. You did a wonderful job.


Tely

[Beleglotiel]

Thanks Tely!!
But why do you perfer it at school? :huh:

[Tar-Ancalimë]

aw go leggy... sorry but i like thranduil....good for leggy to be at least a little sorry :)

oooooooh, great ending, write more :)

[Herenyë]

you stopped at the most greatest spot! its making me want to read it over and over again.....nicely done!!!!!!! *enviousness is so not good ! lol ;)*

[Telyhandoiel]

It just seems to make going to school funner. I just got done reading your last chap. Very good.


Tely

[Beleglotiel]

veryhappy Thanks guys!

School got cancelled today so maybe I'll have time to write my next chapter :grin: :thumbs:

[Amoraq]

I loved it Bele. It was great when Leggy got mad at Thranduil, though I'm kinda sorry for him.
Is it a boy or a girl? Can't wait!

[Little Devil]

Yay, I like this thread. Bele your story is amazing, I think my English teacher probably faint if I wrote anything half as good. ;) lol

[Beleglotiel]

Well, I have thought about showing it to my English and Reading teachers....but I'm not sure what they would think about the 'sexual' stuff in it.........:huh:

[Telyhandoiel]

Well, snow day again. I hope you finish you chap. I just read Tar's story. It's really good. I can't wait to see what happens in your stories.

Tely

[Beleglotiel]

Yeah, well..........i might be able to work on it today.............

[Little Devil]

'sexual' stuff? There's not much, I'm sure they'll look aside that, I think my teacher would, I once wrote a story on a kid who's mother was heavily invovled with drugs. :cool:

[Aldalaire]

Little Devil is probably right. Your teachers would most likely not say anything to you about that.

[Ranger]

This is coming along great Bele, when are you updating? I wanna read more*

[Beleglotiel]

I am very very hopeful that I can get it done today, but since it's my b-day i'm prolly gonna be out with my family doing stuff today. But when I get home I'll work work work on it! :grin:

[Little Devil]

Happy B-day btw, can't wait for the next part, mabe a Legolas junior! how sweet. ;)

[Beleglotiel]

:huh: Well...........I'll tell you guys all about what my original idea was and the like after I post the next chapter. My decision was a very hard one..tho it makes no difference to the plot :huh:

[Tar-Ancalimë]

awww bele that was soo sweet... youre a great writer... and yes i did TOO read it!!

[Beleglotiel]

lol okay okay, I believe you *or do i?* :flamer:

[Elbereth]

Happy Birthday Bele!
Loved the last chapter, really sweet. I love Legolas being assertive and also when he's apologetic (actually i think i just mean all the time :loveyou: )
Lovely name as well

[Beleglotiel]

Heehee
I wanted the name to mean something special and I also wanted it to in some way reflect the parent's names, so i went to a translator and typed in Love Joy Peace and it gave me that name and I was all like 'YAY!' lol but I don't know if the translator is accturate (and it prolly isn't :huh: )

[Lalaith]

Hey - I know I have never commented before, but just to say that I'm enjoying your story ( ihave been reading it for quite a while now) - I may be alone in this, but I like Thranduil as the misguided father.

I do like your characterisation of Legolas - and bless, now he's a daddy! awwww

(oh - and belated happy bday)

[Beleglotiel]

Thanks! Well, you're not alone in liking Thranduil. Tar likes him too.

But if I were to pick a character that I liked more than anyone.............now don't be shocked.............i like Imbethoiniel. I like her cuz she is like the person that everyone goes to for help and most times she can give help and she is always there to help and do stuff and she's just cool! Cuz she is my best friend! And in real life at school she is my best friend. Imbethoiniel is her elvish name and I call her by that all the time at school. She rarely calls me Beleglotiel :huh:

[Amoraq]

I loved it Bele! So happy for Legolas. I'm glad that he and Thranduil are happy with each other again. Keep up the great work! :thumbs:

[Beleglotiel]

Thanks..........

Well, to explain everything here...........
At first I was going to make it a boy.......but then I changed my mind for some reason :huh: ;)

[BeLLe_Etoille]

Just read your latest chapter Bele....absolutely beautiful!! Congrats on the new "addition!" :gaga: :whoohoo:
Definitely looking forward to your next chapter. Keep up the GREAT work! :thumbs:

I just seen the happy news...sorry this is 1 day late....
:birthday: ***Happy Birthday Bele*** :birthday:
Hope it was a great one!!! :)

[Beleglotiel]

It was........thanks!

I'm trying to spark a new idea for my next chapter so............give my brain a break! lol ;)

[Aldalaire]

The last chapter rocked, Bele! That was definitely one of the best chapters you've written!

[Beleglotiel]

Thanks! veryhappy I'm pleased to know you think so!

[BeLLe_Etoille]

No rush at all Bele...definitely take your time, take a break, do other things you need to do, etc......a good story is definitely worth waiting for! :thumbs: :)

[Beleglotiel]

:grin:
First I need to let my readers at school read these new chapters.....then I'll see what I can do on the next chapter in between school and homework............

[Aldalaire]

As BeLLe_Etoille said, "A good story is worth waiting for." (And after all, this is a REALLY, REALLY, REALLY GOOD story, so it's definitely worth waiting for!)

[Tar-Ancalimë]

ooooh, very nice, belster. I love your descriptions and your imaginative plot ideas... *cough cough* lol, no i wont say anything about what you told me ;)

and the foreshadowing at the end there was fantastic. i look forward to reading more.

though next time you might want to proofread it a little more carefully

[Beleglotiel]

Oh, were there a lot of typos? :( I's sorry, I went through it last night and made some corrections :huh: guess i missed some :(

[Elbereth]

Loved the new chapter Bele
I think the addition of other familiar characters was well timed and well done.
I agree your story really is well worth waiting for, new chapters really improve my day!

[Beleglotiel]

veryhappy
I'm glad you like it. I'm almost done with chapter 20 too! :grin:

[Telyhandoiel]

Bele, why did you stop. Get busy writing. I was angry when you urged me to read it for that. Go on. Get busy.

[Beleglotiel]

What do you mean "for that" ? :angry: humph verymad

[Telyhandoiel]

Sorry if it sounded like I didn't like the last two chapters. I was just hoping for the end.

[Beleglotiel]

Hmm, well go read the next chapter that I posted.........the end is sooooooooo nearing ;)

[Herenyë]

oh goodness! Legolas will be okay i know it!.....he cant die! he is like the main character.....and if he dies then ill cry! lol ;) i LOVE that chapter.....leaving me so curious...GRRR nice job! :thumbs:

[Beleglotiel]

mecry You'll jsut have to wait for the sad conclusion...............and if you don't like waiting........blame it on my teachers and school!!! :angry: lol

[Amoraq]

Loved the last few chapters Bele. Poor Legolas! He's GOT to be alright. Really GREAT job. :thumbs:

[Elbereth]

AAAAARRRRGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH
NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
you can't kill him, nnnnoooooooooooooooooo
ahem, sorry about that.
very dramatic plot but wish you had been a little less dramatic and a little kinder to your readers, only joking, i loved it!

[BeLLe_Etoille]

*Wondering if all will be fair in love and war*... :huh: The hopeless romantic in me hopes so... :angel:
I'm very curious to see where you take this next installment Bele...as I have a feeling it could go anywhere from here..is that so, no? ;)

[Beleglotiel]

I should have the conclusion tonight for you if all goes well :thumbs:

[Amoraq]

Awww Bele. I loved it! The ending really made me want to cry. mecry Absolutely great story!!!

[Beleglotiel]

Why thank you *takes a bow* lol

What were your fave parts from the entire thing?

[Amoraq]

Well, loved the ending even though it was very sad. Then some of the parts where Legolas and Thranduil weren't getting along were also fun to read. But it's hard to choose a favorite cause I liked all of it. :thumbs:

[Little Devil]

So romantic, dying in each other's arms, awwww *tear* :thumbs good job. ;)

[BeLLe_Etoille]

*Stands and applaud's* Bravo...Bravo.......Beautiful and Heart warming, with a heartbreaking twist, you broke away from the "expected" norm of the story.... AMAZING work Bele!!! notworthy :thumbs:

I have to admit, I did get "misty" with the passing of Legolas and Beleglotiel, so tragic, so sad....yet so romantic to die in each others arms... mecry
And I keep thinking of Legolas & Bele's daughter....her life, growing up without her parents...sooooo sad, yet they will always be her strength, her heart and soul.... :angel:

I have sooooo many favourite parts in this story Bele...however, a few that do stand out are the "meeting of Legolas and beleglotiel", watching their relationship "grow"...their marriage....the new "arrival"...and much more... :)

Again, Bravo Bele...great work!! :thumbs:

[Beleglotiel]

veryhappy Hey......i should win and award for this or and Oscar or something lol j/k ;) :thumbs:

I've got fave parts here and there.............though I can't think of any off the top of my head lol Hmm............

[Aldalaire]

Forget the Oscars... I'm thinking Nobel Prize! (for literature, of course)

[Little Devil]

That's not a bad idea, ;)

And the Nobel Prize for literature goes toooooo.............*drum roll please* Beleglotiel 'How we met' :hooray: :hooray: ;)

[Beleglotiel]

Wait, wait wait! HOLD THE PHONE! That title is poopy-doop!! It is sooooooo being changed! lol

[Elleth]

Great job Beleglotiel!! You are a great writer!! :thumbs:

[Beleglotiel]

Thank you!
Ohhh! BTW I forgot to make my thank yous to all the people who helped me in the process and made this fanfic possible ;)

Tar-Ancalime for all her words of wisdom
My friend Imbethoiniel for her encouragement
and last but not least, Wil for her translations!

Sorry if I left anybody out :thumbs: