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Wilwarin
February 5th,2003, 04:09 AM
Day calendar poem! This one is a picture of Frodo laying in his bed in Rivendell (I'm sure you've seen this one).



"Fevered Sleep"

My dreams were like an endless black nightmare,
A river running through my head.
They sought to drown me, I was gasping for air;
Over my heart was a constant dread.

I was surounded by darkness as if it was matter,
A thing one could touch and feel.
It desired and sought me, my defenses to shatter,
My hope and my sanity to kill.

I reached out for life, but it was drifting away,
Like a ship on a stormy sea.
And the rain and the clouds hid the ship from my sight.
I knew death was now coming for me.

I longed for death now, as a way to escape
This unlife where I hardly exist;
To be free from the pain and this burden so great,
I longed for death's comfort and bliss.

Yet death did not come as soon as I'd hoped,
Life lingered a while by my side.
From out of the darkness a soft voice spoke;
Eternity's grip it defied.

Then there was nothing, no fear or pain,
No darkness eternally deep.
I felt life return when the voice caled my name,
And death turned to fevered sleep.

The voice had a power that chaced death away,
Light pierced my soul when it spoke.
The sun finally shone on a brandnew day,
And at last from despair I awoke.


©Kathryn H.

Nessa the Dancer
February 5th,2003, 02:03 PM
Wil, that is FANTASTIC!!!!!
i like the way the poem progresses from trying to cling to life at first, to despair and wanting death to come, to grasping at life and hope, and I like how you have incorparated what happened at the river into Frodo's thoughts as well.
I love this poem!!! :grin:

Wilwarin
February 5th,2003, 09:04 PM
Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it. It's one of my favorites too.

Galadriel
February 6th,2003, 02:24 AM
That was so Great. I relly liked it. Wonderful!

Ithielnor
February 6th,2003, 03:50 PM
Well done Wil! I love it. Keep up the good work.

Wilwarin
February 6th,2003, 08:00 PM
Thanks!

Tar-Ancalimë
February 6th,2003, 11:13 PM
im a bit late commenting on this... sorry hon lol

but i enjoyed reading it very much. thats a powerful time of emotions and doubt, and your poetry expresses it really well. again, i have to say i look forward to seeing more day calendar poems from you! :grin:

Wilwarin
February 8th,2003, 02:08 AM
Thanks Tar! I'm glad you like it.

Sindarin
February 8th,2003, 06:10 AM
Once again, Wilwarin, you've written another lovely poem. :thumbs: