A Poem. Please Read

[Galadriel]

Okay i wrote this poem for a guy that I really like and I wanted to know what other people thought about it. Thanks

I know that we have not always gotten along,
I have admired and wanted you for so long,
You smile could brighten up the darkest place
And everyday i can't wait to just see your face,
You got a wonderful personality and smile
And just seeing you makes everything worthwhile,
it fills my heart with joy just to hear your voice
And if it was my choice,
I would say never stop being you
Becasue it's true
that I like you.

[Tar-Ancalimë]

:) i like it. its simple and touching. well done... do write a lot of poetry?

[Galadriel]

no not really. I mean my friend convinced me to write this one. I usually am not very good at stuff like this.

[Nessa the Dancer]

I really like that!! As Tar says simple and touching. Well done!

I've got a few poems that I've writen for people I like or about them. Someone has to be really special to me though for me to do that, because I find that type of writing really hard to do.

[Tar-Ancalimë]

well thats awesome. I meant you should post more of your poetry, but thats fine too :thumbs:

[TheRingBearer]

Here's my poem...(cough cough):

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Most poems rhyme
This one doesn't

:grin: lol

[Galadriel]

lol true most poems don't rhyme,

[Keverzwijn]

Hi everyone, I'm kinda new to this section. I wrote a story and I would like to share it with you. I'm not saying it's that good and I would have to translate it from my language to English but I'd liketotry it. So if a regular could point out a nice spot for my story, I'll post it.

P.S. DArn, I just found a forum where I should post my stuff. You'll find my story at fan fiction.

[Olorin]

for someone who thinks their not good at poetry you did good.

[Fairawen]

She's right Galadriel, you did do pretty good for not knowing how to write poetry! BTW, as soon as I have finished it, I'm going to be posting an adaptation of when Borromir tried to take the Ring from Frodo. It all rymes and I think so far it's going well! Well, WTG Galadriel, you can write poetry!

[Galadriel]

Well thanks.

[Fairawen]

Your welcome Galadriel!