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Beleglotiel
February 18th,2003, 03:36 AM
I posted this poem a while back and I also sent it into a contest and I am please to infrom you that it is being published!! If any of you would like to check it out it will be published in the Anthology of Poetry by Young Americans about 25-27weeks after March 31 :grin:

The Son of Thranduil

Waiting, hiding, sweating out the peril,
What fate will bring I cannot tell,
A song of hope we will sing,
But where is our savior,
Son of the king,

We've sent word,
Received no reply,
Is this our fate,
Are we doomed to die?
But alas I say where is the lad,
In green and grey this warrior's clad,
The ray of hope from a window sill,
Where is Legolas, son of Thranduil,

There has been gossip from the land of Mirkwood,
That arrive he will, arrive he should,
But will he come in time to save us,
Our last armies fall all around us,
It seems all is lost and all is ill,
When will he come, Legolas, son of Thranduil,

Aye, what's that sound,
Sounded from all around,
Watch as the joyous trumpet calls,
Prince Legolas passes through the gate walls,
His mighty elven army follows at his heals,
At last our savior has come, the son of Thranduil,

With his mighty arrows and bow,
He vanquishes the enemy row by row,
Now his arrow supply is no more,
With blades in hand his deadly daggers soar,
The once calm wind blows his long locks of blonde hair,
A warrior he seems but truly he is handsome and fair,
He has come to save us and save us he will,
He is a warrior and savior, the son of Thranduil,

Both feuding armies have taken casualties,
The elven army is winning against our Orc enemies,
At last the Orcs know they cannot win and are retreating,
Cries of victory are called which keep repeating,
They are victorious yet injured,
And their wounds must be tended,
Prince Legolas led his army valiantly,
Which resulted in a victory,

He is fair of face and has a way with words,
He is lovely as the dawn with a voice more musical than birds,
He's gentle at heart, but a warrior he must become,
When the sound of war is beat upon the drum,
Every graceful step he takes cannot be heard,
For a description of his elegance there is no word,
All you can go by, is what you feel,
He is a Prince, savior, and warrior,
Legolas the son of Thranduil.

Sindarin
February 18th,2003, 03:51 AM
Quite a very nice poem, Beleglotiel. :thumbs:

Several congratulations that it's being published. :)

Beleglotiel
February 18th,2003, 03:53 AM
Thanks! :grin: :)

Tar-Ancalimë
February 18th,2003, 04:02 AM
aw thats great bele, im really happy for you :grin:

but bele could you find the old thread and post something more in there? pleeease? instead of making a new one? :( lol

Beleglotiel
February 18th,2003, 04:08 AM
It went away I thought? :(

Tar-Ancalimë
February 18th,2003, 04:13 AM
no... at the bottom of the forum, theres a bunch of drop down menus, where it says 'last 60 days', select 'the beginning' instead... then go back a few pages and, voila, theres your poem!

or if you cant remember where it was... you can always do a search 'by title only' .... thats just an option you choose under the entry box... entering whatever you remember the title was

alternatively you could do a search on your own posts, by clicking that little green button 'find' at the bottom of every post you have. then you can go to the last page, where it will show your first posts... since that was one of your first posts, you should be able to find it quickly

or you can always pm me, and ask me if i know where it went lol

Beleglotiel
February 18th,2003, 06:22 PM
Well..............can you just delete that one or something and keep this one? :huh:

Tar-Ancalimë
February 18th,2003, 11:58 PM
lol no, i dont mean you have to do anything, just for future reference... try and find the old threads :grin:

Stone Drake
March 15th,2003, 12:32 PM
I sometimes read or get back older threads... although it's quite stupid if you read all threads on the forum and post a reply to something that had been posted a year ago :p

Black Rider
March 15th,2003, 07:34 PM
wow. great poem. congrats on getting it published