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Herenyë
February 25th,2003, 05:04 AM
This is my first fanfic.....and if there is any errors tell me.....cuz yea i was bored.....and im not a writer.......heehee have fun reading it! hopefully it is descent ;) heehee
im scared....really scared.....but here it goes :grin: plus if its horrible tell the truth about it.....heehee
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ThE WeDdInG
The Wedding
“Herenyë, it is time.” Said the elf-maiden with a slight smile.
“The day has finally arrived. It seems like it was yesterday when I first met him. And finally we are here to be wed.”
The elf-maiden just smiled at her. In her eyes she sees a young maiden standing in front of the window, a waiting the day that every young elf-maiden is waiting for in their life and there she was, tall, beautiful, and elegant. Her eyes, deep blue, penetrating, and mesmerizing. Her dark hair shimmered in the shine light and long wavy it looked. And the day that she is waiting for, ever since she was a young maiden has come.
“We must be going. Your Prince awaits you. And may I add that your dress looks beautiful on you. He is certainly lucky.”
“Thank you Altanyérë, and I am certainly lucky to have him…have him forever in my life.”
The elf-maiden just smiled greatly.
“Now, we must hurry. It has already started.”
They both walked to the center of the palace, the center of the palace was out in the open. Altanyérë showed Herenyë where she must be at that time. She led her to the back of the ceremony, in this room where she must wait until it was for her to walk down to her husband to be. As Herenyë entered the room she saw how beautiful it looked. The room had this soft light, and it looked blue. The room had paintings of trees and birds flying. It almost felt real. The feeling made her remember her visit to Lothlorien. When she was thinking of her time there she heard a voice.
“Herenyë! Herenyë!”
“Yes?” she responded as if she was awoken.
“Its time for your walk…”
“Thank you…I nearly feel asleep…this room reminds me of Lothlorien.”
“Yes I know…every time I am in here it reminds me of Lothlorien too …now you must walk down.”
As Herenyë and Altanyérë walked out, Althanyérë led Herenyë to the entering door.
“Now, just walk down as we practiced yesterday.”
“Yes I know. Thank you Althanyérë…for everything.” She said with a smile.
“It was a honor.” She smiled back and then pulled a rope next to the door slowly and as she pulled the door slowly opened. When the door opened half way Althanyérë told Herenyë to go on. She walked out slowly. As she walked she ignored everyone on the side. Her eyes were just focused on her Prince. As she looked at him she saw a tall, gorgeous man, with long dark straight hair, his eyes was the best part, it was deep, and glimmered in the light. Every time she looks into his eyes she just fall in love all over again. Then, finally, she arrived to the front. As she got there all she can do is smile. And so does her husband. He was extremely happy. The (Priest), Lord Annotar, took their hands and he began to speak.
“I lú utúlië” (The time has come)
He lifted Hênvain and Herenyë hands and put them together.
“Elyë, Herenyë, vestuva cuilelya as Hênvain, ar oialë onauvalyë. Ter naicelë, ter nyérë, ter alassë. Ar raimelya etyélië ar tielya yesta."
(You, Herenyë, will unite your life with Hênvain, and forever you will be together. Through Pain, Through Sorrow, Through Joy and Through Happiness [lit Through Joy/Happiness]. And so your search has ended and your journey begins.)
Hênvain and Herenyë looked into each other’s eyes. They both were mesmerized by each other.
“May I have the necklaces?”
A little elf brought up the necklaces.
“Hênvain, take this necklace and place it on Herenyë.”
He did so as he was told.
“Herenyë, take this necklace and place it on Hênvain.”
She did as she was told.
“Nalyë sí veru,” (You are now married) he smiled he continued, “You may kiss!” he said with a laugh.
After hearing the last line, they both passionately kissed each other. The crowd was cheering. They were happy for them. Once the newlywed finished their kiss, they looked at the crowd. After they looked to the crowd they walked down the aisle.
“(In elvish) Congratulations!” said some elf-maiden.
“I am so happy for you!” said another.
“Thank you.” Said the newlyweds.
Next Chapter.....will be done tomorrow....hopefully you guys like it heehee
Herenyë
February 25th,2003, 06:32 AM
THE LOSS
Once they reached out the ceremony Hênvain took Herenyë’s hand.
“Follow me…I want you to come with me before we go back to the celebration.”
She smiled and followed him. He took her deep into the woods. After a couple of leagues they arrived. They arrived to a wall of willow trees. He moved some of the leaves and there was a door. He opened it and walked in.
“Come inside.”
Once she entered she saw a beautiful site. There was a lake and a little island in the middle. The water was shimmering. The light from outside shined down on the water.
“This is beautiful!”
“I am glad you like it.”
He went towards the water and there was a boat. He grabbed it.
“Come here. Lets go for a ride.”
She nodded and went into the boat. As they rode down the water they talked.
“Melinyel …” said Hênvain as she caresses her hair, “ You are so beautiful…” once he said that his lips met hers. They became intimate with each other. Then she released from him and began to speak.
“Melinyel …” she said as her lips touched his,” and remember. I will be with you always and forever (in elvish).”
“I will be here for you…. always and forever…” they kissed. They were intimate once again with each other. He released from her and he stopped. He was still.
“What is wrong?” asked Herenyë.
“Shh…”
She nodded and sat still. She wondered what was wrong. They stood quiet, and then he finally broke the silence.
“I heard something.”
“What did you hear?” asked the worried maiden.
“I am not sure. But I heard something,” he sat still once again, he was thinking, “Lets go outside.”
“Okay.”
They walked out. They held hands and hugged. But still even though they were passionate, Hênvain seemed worried.
“Honey, is the sound still bothering you?”
“No…well yes. I do not know what I heard. It does not seem like an animal. It seemed…” then he stopped and laid on her shoulder.
part of chapter 2 heehee
Herenyë
February 26th,2003, 03:51 AM
“Honey?” she then gave him a hug and felt a liquid on his back. She looked at her hand and as she saw it she panic. It was blood. He was shot with an arrow. She started to hear arrows going towards her and towards the kingdom.
“No…..no…….” she started to speak as a tear fell from her eyes. “Honey?”
He opened his eyes once more.
“I love you………” and his eyes shut.
“No…..don’t leave me…..” she cried hysterically. She kissed him. “Goodnight my prince.” She said as she tried to hold her tears.
The orcs did not bother to hurt her anymore. They just went straight to the kingdom. She gently placed her husband down next to the willow tree as she hurried to get to the kingdom to warn her people. She knew a shortcut. “I must travel by the trees.” She thought to herself. She jumped up into the nearest tree. She was a good jumper and climber. As she got on the tree, she quickly paced herself as she jumped from tree to tree. She was almost there and she did not see any orcs around. “The orcs are left behind. I shall have time to tell the king.” She thought. On her last tree jump she slipped. She manage to get herself back up on the tree branch. Once she got on the last tree she saw that she was too late. The orcs got there before she has. As she got down from the tree, she was full of anger. She walked closer to the west gate of her kingdom. As she did she notice that there was a sword lying on the ground. She ran towards the sword and picked it up. She was going into battle. She knew that if she goes straight into the battlefield that she will be highly notice. So she decided to go through that South Gate. As she went to the South Gate she notice a lifeless body lying on the floor. As she got closer she notice that the face was familiar. She looked at it carefully and she notice it was someone she knew very well.
“No…..No…….” she ran away from the scene. She was full of anger and sadness. Another tear ran down her pale cheeks. She couldn’t bear to she her closest friend, Altanyérë, lying there. She decided to just go straight to the battlefield.
Adunauriel
February 27th,2003, 12:53 AM
That's a really great start Herenyë:thumbs:.. It's too bad you lost your love so quickly thou..:(
Herenyë
February 27th,2003, 03:11 AM
Yea i know.....there is a twist thou *rubs hand lol*
Herenyë
February 27th,2003, 06:02 AM
(ignore the last two lines and move on from here.)
She ran away from the scene. She was full of anger and sadness. Another tear ran down her pale cheeks. She couldn’t bear to she her closest friend, Altanyérë, lying there. She decided to just go straight to the battlefield. She went straight there and the first orc she saw was the first to die. She chopped his head off with no pity. Then she was fighting. She killed every single orc that attacked her. As she fought she arrived to the North Gate she notice more and more dead bodies. Elves and Orcs were lying on the floor. The dead bodies on the ground were mostly her closest friends. As she fought all she could think about was her love. She was full of despair. As she stabbed an orc that came from behind she turned and she notice she was not alone fighting against the orcs. She quickly went over there to help for there was much too many orcs to fight.
“Herenyë?”
“Father, there is no time to talk. We must fight.” She laughed.
He merely smiled and fought. They killed many orcs together.
“Is there any others fighting?” she asked.
“Yes, they are on the east gate.”
“Wheres Mother?” asked Herenyë.
“In the palace. She is safe.”
She nodded and kept on fighting. As she was killing an orc there was an Uruk-Hai aiming an arrow at her. He released the arrow and her father heard and pushed Herenyë out of the way. He got hit with the arrow. Her reaction to that was she threw her sword at the Uruk-Hai. It stabbed him in his neck. She quickly went to her father’s aid. Most of the Uruk-Hais and Orcs left the battlefield.
“Father…don’t worry…you will be alright.”
“No…I wish to die in battle…just go and help the others…” he replied with his last breathe.
“But Father…”
“Just go…” he said with a proud tone, “Wait, take this,” he handed her a ring, “I want you to keep this in remembrance of our kingdom. I love you my daughter.”
She nodded and replied, “I love you Father.” And she was off to the Eastern Gate. As she went she helped her friend fight against the Orcs.
“Where have you been?” said Glâneth.
She just smiled at her. “Just be happy I am already here.”
They both fought on. As Herenyë fought she saw her brother fighting, and her other friends fighting. She continued to fight on. They both killed more Orcs and Uruk-Hais.
“Herenyë, I must go and help my brother. He is over with your brother. Can you do without my help?”
“Yes. There is only a few left. I can manage.” She replied as she stabbed a Uruk-Hai. Glâneth ran to her brother’s help. As she ran she got struck with an arrow.
“Glâneth!” yelled Herenyë, but it was too late. She ran over to see if she is still alive. “Glâneth? Don’t leave me now…” she did not respond. She died. Herenyë just kept fighting. She had no other thought in her mind but to kill the orcs. She kept fighting until all the orcs fled. As they all fled, she searched if there were any survivors. As she searched she found no survivors. She went to the palace and hoped that the orcs did not go in. But hoped failed her. The orcs did go in. She searched and found more dead bodies. She rushed to her father’s bedroom and hoped, even though all hope seemed to have left, her mother was still alive. She walked up the stairs slowly because she did not know what to expect. She arrived to the second floor and walked to the room. The door was slightly opened. She walked into the room. She gasped. She saw that her mother was tortured. Her mother hands were tied separately on two bed post and her mothers. She rushed to her mother and to see if she was still alive.
“Mother?” as she untied her mother.
“Herenyë?” her mother asked wearily. “Is it you?”
“Yes mother.” She said in a sign of relieve. “What did they do to you?”
“Herenyë, I want you to be careful. They are in search for something. Go now to Rivendell. Lord Elrond will take care of you there.”
“You do not know what they are in search of?”
“I heard it is a crystal. It is also very small. If they know that you are still alive they will hunt for you.”
“Yes mother. I will pack our things.”
“No. You must go yourself. I shall not be able to survive now. Leave me to die. Now go.” With her last breathe.
“Yes mother.” She said without arguing.
end of chapter two
Chapter 3 = The meeting
She packed the things that were needed for a journey. She gathered her weapons, lembas, and her elven cloak. When she got back to her mother she kneel down to her and tapped her shoulder. “Mother?” there was no answer. She knew her mother left her already. She walked carrying her mother, her father, and her brother to where her husband lies. She places them gently down on the ground and went into the cave. As she walked in sadness overflowed her body. She started to cry even more as she walked in and grabbed the boat. Once she finished getting the boat she placed the boat on the ground near the bodies. She places them in the boat slowly and gently. When she finished she recited a poem in native tongue as she finished she poured flower palettes all over them and she push them down the river and closed her eyes and wish the best for them for their after life. Once she opened her eyes, the boat is gone. She cried a bit but she knew she must leave. She traveled by trees. She has been traveling by tree till it was midnight. She was tried and she decided to lie on a tree branch she was on. As she lay asleep on the tree branch she was a woken by a noise. She stay up and sat still. She saw whom it was but she could not get a clear view.
“You can come down here. You have nothing to fear.” Said the rider.
Her heart stopped...
Little Devil
February 27th,2003, 05:57 PM
Who's this rider??? It's good, poor Herenye, loses pretty much all her family. keep it up. ;) :thumbs:
Adunauriel
February 27th,2003, 11:14 PM
I wonder who the rider is, but I guess I'll have to wait...:mmmm:
Herenyë
February 28th,2003, 12:51 AM
yes you must wait ;)
and yea she lost actually everyone in her kingdom mecry but she survive! heehee thanks for reading *feels loved lol*
Herenyë
February 28th,2003, 04:02 AM
Well youll find out the riders right after you finish reading this heehee......
”How does the rider know I am in the tree?” she thought.
“Come down! I do not bite” the rider laughed, “Or would you want me to go up?”
“Just leave her. If she do not want to come down then lets just leave her here.” Whispered the other rider.
“Just let me try. If I get her down then you owe me 4 arsings.”
“Deal. But if you don’t get her down then you owe me 5 arsings.”
“Fine.” He whispered back.
“Are you scared? Do not worry. I am an elf. I will not hurt our kins.”
She was confused. She does not know if she could trust them even though the rider claims he is an elf. “What should I do? They are elves but I do not know where they are from. I must think fast. They know I am here.” She just sat there and waited for them to leave her.
“Well then. I guess I must go up if you do not wish to come down.” Said the rider as he comes off the horse. She froze. “I guess they leave me no choice but to jump down” She jumped down and grabbed the free horse. She rode the horse down the path.
“Well I guess you owe me 5 arsings my friend.”
“Just be quiet.” He said with a bit of shame. “I guess we are up for a cat chase.” He laughed.
“Don’t worry we will get her Eruvadhor” said the other rider.
Eruvadhor just shook his head. “I will travel by trees and you travel by horse. Go towards King Thranduil’s kingdom by going east as I go west. We will trap her by doing that.”
Once they finished, they were off. Eruvadhor is a swift traveler. And his friend is a swift rider. As they were chasing, Herenyë was riding to their little trap. She thought that she had beaten them but she didn’t. The rider was sneaking towards Herenyë because he had spotted her. Eruvadhor, too, had spotted her. Herenyë decided to just take her time, as she rode slowly down the path, the rider jumped in front of her. She gasped. Eruvadhor then jumped down the tree.
“Well, that wasn’t to hard. May I take back my horse?” he asked with a laugh. Herenyë did not respond. She merely jumped off the horse and let him have it.
“Why do you fear us? I wish not to hurt you.”
She just stood there and ignored them.
“If you want, we can help you go to where ever you need to go.”
She wanted to respond but she did not know if she should. But she decided to just reply back.
“I do not fear you. I know you will not hurt me.”
Eruvadhor was shocked to finally hear her respond back, but he was also relieved.
“Well then, the rider on the horse, his name is Glorfindel.”
“Suilad.” (Greetings/Hello) said Glorfindel.
“Suilad.” She replied back. She thought in her head, that Glorfindel was a gorgeous, strong, young elf. But she could bear to look at him, he reminded her of her husband. So, she turned away.
“And my name is Eruvadhor.”
“Suilad.”
“Suilad. And, what is your name?”
“My name is Herenyë.”
“May I ask, if you do not mind, why were you hiding in the trees?” asked Eruvadhor.
“I was on my way somewhere.”
“Where?”
“To Rivendell.”
“I am on my way there tonight, If you want you may come along.” Glorfindel said.
“Really?”
“Yes. But if you want to come with me to Rivendell you must come with me to King Thranduil first. I must send a message to him.”
“I will go then.”
“Lets go.” Said Eruvadhor as he jumped on his horse. He realized that Herenyë has to walk on foot and he forgot his manners and politely jumped off the horse. “Sorry, I forgot. Here,” as he handed the rail to Herenyë, ”You ride the horse. I can walk by foot.”
She nodded and jumped on the horse. As they rode to King Thranduil's kingdom, they had a lot of conversations. She found out that Glorfindel was a close friend of Elrond and also lives in Rivendell. She also found out that Eruvadhor was a prince, son of Thranduil. She did not reveal to them what had happened but she feels she will reveal it soon.....
Adunauriel
February 28th,2003, 11:33 PM
Ah, so one of the Riders was my dear love Glorfindel.. Well, I shall not be jealous, for I know he loves me....;)
Herenyë
March 1st,2003, 01:53 AM
dont worry ;) heehee..............youll see who else is going to be in the story ;)
Little Devil
March 1st,2003, 02:22 AM
My bet's on Legolas, but I'm not sure could be wrong. And nice to see Glory in a story without Arwen. ;) Nice work Hezzy. :thumbs:
Herenyë
March 1st,2003, 06:05 PM
As they arrived to Mirkwood, a elf maiden and a few elves were waiting eagerly for Glorfindel. When they arrived the maiden quickly went up to Glorfindel.
“Glorfindel, I have a surprise for you.” She said smiling.
Glorfindel went off his horse and went to the maiden. The elves were smiling
“What is it? Is it….”
“Yes,” interrupted the maiden. “She is in the room.”
Glorfindel smiled and was excited. He turned back to Eruvadhor and Herenyë.
“Come with me.” He said with excitement. He rushed to his room and Eruvadhor and Herenyë followed. When they reached his room, Glorfindel knocked on the door. Another maiden opened the door.
“May I see her?” Glorfindel asked impatiently.
“Yes, she just went into labor.” She said with a slight smile. “Your friends can come in too but they must not get to close to her.”
They walked in the room. As they entered, they saw about 5 other maidens around the women in labor. Glorfindel quickly moved next to his wife.
“Where have you been? I have been looking for you before I was in labor.” She asked.
“Do not worry about that, I am here now.” He replied with a smile.
As the maidens and the couple were doing their jobs Herenyë was quite upset. She had a future with Hênvain. They were to have a family.
“Eruvadhor, may I be excused.” She said sadly.
“What is wrong?”
“Nothing, I just want to be outside, for now.”
“You may. Do you want me to come with you?”
“If you want.”
He told one of the maidens to tell Glorfindel that they were going outside. She did as she was told. Glorfindel walked to them.
“Sorry that I did not really talk to you. My wife is in labor. I must stay here as she gives birth.”
“You do not need to apologize, I understand.” Replied Herenyë.
“I hope you and Adunauriel the best.” Said Eruvadhor as he walks out the door. Herenyë smiled and walked out also.
heehee ;)
thanks for reading........heehee
Adunauriel
March 1st,2003, 08:09 PM
I'm haveing a baby... How sweet.... :grin: :cool:
Herenyë
March 2nd,2003, 01:13 AM
if that was okay...........your in my story :thumbs: heehee
Adunauriel
March 2nd,2003, 06:52 AM
It's more then ok, I'm proud to be in your story.. If you have any questions about myself, feel free to PM me...:thumbs:
Winyaél Greenleaf
March 2nd,2003, 08:36 AM
Aww... lucky Adun gets to be in the story with her love!
Your story's nice, Herenyë. Liked it so far. :thumbs:
I'm not very good at writing this kinda emotional stories. I prefer writing humour stuff. Hee.. I posted one up. It's called The Real Story of How the Ringbearer was chosen. It involves all the members of the fellowship, Elrond, Arwen and Glorfindel. Sorry for advertising here. Heehee... :blush:
Good luck with your story. Adun is SOOO LUCKY!!! *envious*
Herenyë
March 2nd,2003, 08:19 PM
Dont Worry...........theres going to be way more people in it heehee..........thanks for reading! i feel so much better! and yes Win, (if i can call you that) i like your story ;) heehee...........i read the first chapter..........im trying to read the second chapter........heehee ;)
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They walked until they went out of the kingdom and enter into the forest. Once they entered Eruvadhor broke the silence.
"Where did you come from, if i may ask."
"I came from the Kingdom of Galrilion." replied Herenyë.
"Kingdom of Galrilion?"
"Yes, that is in the North of Mirkwood. Quite a distance from here."
"I see. I have not been there."
She nodded. She was about to cry because she cant go back. She then took off her ring and admired it.
"That is a nice ring." he said with a smile.
"Thank you."
They kept on walking and Herenyë heard something.
"Did you hear that?" she asked.
"Do not worry, that is one of our horses. Someone has just arrived from their journey."
Herenyë sighed in relieve.
"Lets go sit down next to Besseth."
"Besseth? There is someone else here?" she was confused.
"No," laughed Eruvadhor,"It is this tree. My brothers and i would always go here if we are confused, worried, or if we are happy. I usually go here if i get in trouble." he said with another laugh.
"I see," she blushed,"Where is the tree?"
Eruvadhor walked up to very tall willow tree. He started to climb up.
"Come on."
Herenyë was about to climb up but suddenly, a rider rode up to her. Herenyë backed away from the tree as the horse roared as the rider slightly pulled the rein.
"Legolas, be careful" yelled Eruvadhor.
"Sorry, I thought this was Winyaél." He laughed.
"I am sorry." he said to Herenyë.
Eruvadhor jumped down from the tree and punched his brother in a brotherly way.
"Herenyë, this is my older brother Legolas," Eruvadhor said with a smile,"And Legolas, this is Herenyë."
"Suilad Herenyë." he said with a smile.
"Suilad Legolas." she replied back with a smile. She found him very gorgeous. He did not look like his younger brother. He was taller, more muscular, beautiful eyes, very penertrating, and his hair was very shiny in gold. His brother is handsome too but is shorter and not as muscular as him.
Herenyë
March 2nd,2003, 08:24 PM
CHAPTER 4
They walked back to the kingdom. Herenyë was walking ahead as Eruvadhor and Legolas was in the back.
"She is cute." whispered Legolas. Eruvadhor laughed and shook his head.
"What?" asked Legolas. They kept on talking and did not know that Herenyë heard their conversation. She giggled and kept on walking.
"Herenyë, you do not have to walk too fast." laughed Eruvadhor.
She turned and walked back towards them.
"Is something bothering you?"
"Nothing. I just...." she laughed
Herenyë
March 2nd,2003, 10:54 PM
eard our conversation?" laughed Legolas.
"Yes I did."
"Was i that loud?" asked Legolas
Herenyë laughed.
"I think that was a yes Legolas." said Eruvadhor with a smile.
Legolas smiled and they continued to walk. They reached the entrance to kingdom. When they walked in, a lady came up and hugged and kissed Eruvadhor. They were talking and Herenyë and Legolas just waited.
"Hrrm" sighed Legolas.
"Sorry about that, Winyaèl, this is Herenyë. And of course, you know Legolas" laughed Eruvadhor.
"Suilad Herenyë."
"Suilad Winyaèl."
"Eruva, your father wants to speak with you."
"Oh really?," sighed Eruvadhor, "Excuse me, I must go to my father. Legolas, keep her company." laughed Eruvadhor.
Winyaèl and Eruvadhor walked into the palace. They stood for a moment, and finally Legolas broke the silence.
"What bring you here?"
"Your brother, I was actually heading for Rivendell. I was weary and fell asleep on a tree branch. I awoke because your brother was riding his horse down the path. I stood still but he knew i was up here and he took me here." replied Herenyë.
"Have you been around here before?"
"No. But i leave in the Kingdom of Galrilion. The northern part of Mirkwood."
"I see. Do you want me to show you around or has Eruvadhor has already?"
"No he hasnt. He just took me to the willow tree."
"I see. Well, ill first take you to meet my father because this is your first time here."
"Okay. But isnt he speaking to Eruvadhor?"
"He is, but its okay."
They walked into the palace.
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Eruvadhor entered into his fathers meeting room and Winyaèl stood outside.
"Father? You wished to see me."
"Come in, and sit down son," said his father, "I heard from Thalion that you brought a new face. Who is she?"
"Father, she is......."
A knock on the door interrupted Eruvadhor.
"Come in." said his father.
Legolas and Herenyë walked in.........
Little Devil
March 3rd,2003, 12:14 AM
Very good Hezzy, :thumbs:
Winyaél Greenleaf
March 3rd,2003, 12:08 PM
Ah! So Legolas is my brother-in-law. I am his cousin in an rpg under the gaming haven forum. Haha. lol lol Yup, you can call me Win :).
Adunauriel
March 3rd,2003, 07:03 PM
It's really good Hezzy, I can't wait to read more...;)
Little Devil
March 3rd,2003, 11:02 PM
Ditto, hope the next partcomes up soon. :thumbs:
Adunauriel
March 3rd,2003, 11:51 PM
I wonder if I'm haveing a boy, or girl... I kind of hope it's a boy...;)
Herenyë
March 4th,2003, 03:20 AM
heehee well here is the other part!
"Legolas, i see you brought the new face."
"Yes i did father, her name is Herenyë"
"Suilad Herenyë, i am Legolas and Eruvadhor's father, and king of this beautiful kingdom."
"Suilad King Thranduil. And yes this is a beautiful kingdom."
"May i ask, are you the daughter of Galrilion?"
"Yes I am, how do you know?"
"Well, i visited the kingdom long time ago, it might have been 6 thousand years ago."
"That is why the kingdom sounded familiar father!" exclaimed Eruvadhor.
"I see. But how come i do not recongize you my lord?" asked Herenyë.
"It could have been that i did not stay too long. I send a message to the king and a gift from Lord Elrond."
Herenyë nodded.
"I see that all my answers were answered. You are free to go."
They walked out and left the king to his study. As Legolas was about to go out, the king stopped him.
"Legolas."
Legolas stood back into the study.
"You must not let the princess alone."
"Yes father."
Legolas left and caught up with Herenyë and Eruvadhor. They walked awhile until Glorfindel came out.
"Legolas! Legolas!" yelled Glorfindel.
"What is it?" asked Legolas. Eruvadhor and Herenyë just stood there with curiousity.
"I am a father! Im a father!" said Glorfindel with complete excitment.
"What is it?" asked Winyaèl from a distance, "What happened?"
"You are yelling quite loud if Winyaèl can hear from the balcony," laughed Eruvadhor, "Glorfindel is a father, Winyaèl"
"Congratulation Glorfindel." said Herenyë.
"Congratulations," said Legolas, "I must tell father of this great event! Eruvadhor, tell father about this."
"Fine, congratulations Glorfindel." said Eruvadhor as he left.
"I am a father." sighed Glorfindel. "Let me show you my son, Eruannon."
He walked to the room and Legolas and Herenyë followed.
"Legolas! Tell Adunauriel Congratulations for me!" yelled Winyaèl.
Legolas nodded and kept on following.
Celebrían
March 4th,2003, 05:58 AM
Is that all?! Good story! You have me wanting more! I especially love the part where Legolas nearly runs over Herenye on his horse. That's classic! I also loved the line at the beginning about her responing "as if she were awoken" ( I think that's it). Great line!!! :thumbs:
Didn't you mention that there would be a twist or something? Is Legolas being in the story the "twist" or has the twist not happened yet?
Also, just out of curiosity does anybody know if in the books, (LOTR and Simarillion) we are given any details about Legolas' family (for instance the existence of other family members)? I know his father is Thranduil, but do we know of the existence of other family members (and if so, their names)? Just curious. :)
Adunauriel
March 4th,2003, 09:29 PM
I know that in the LotR book, only Thranduil is mentioned.. But haveing not read The Silmarillian yet, can't comment about that..;)
Yea, I had a little boy... I feel a sence of pride, and I didn't do anything IRL.... Thank you ever so much Hezzy...;)
Celebrían
March 5th,2003, 02:28 AM
Thanks for the info, Adunauriel! That's what I thought, too, but I just thought I'd ask :thumbs:
Herenyë
March 5th,2003, 04:26 AM
Youll see.....its coming ;)
Chapter 5 - The Discovery
When they all arrived to Adunauriel, they greeted her and congratulated her.
"I cant believe this day has come!" said Legolas, "We have been waiting for this for a while."
Adunauriel just laughed and responded, "You should be happy that you do not have to go through this pain."
"Your son is beautiful." said Herenyë.
"Thank You." responded the new parents.
"So what did i miss?" asked Eruvadhor as he ran inside the door.
"Nothing." replied Adunauriel.
"Your son is beautiful. He looks like his mother," said Eruvadhor, "Father is having the celebration tonight."
Legolas, Herenyë, and Eruvadhor departed the room as the maidens cleaned up. The parents, of course, had a 'talk' of their own.
While they walked, Herenyë felt ill.
"What is wrong?" asked Legolas.
"I do not know. I feel...." as she talked she fainted.
"Eruva, get Neumë. And hurry."
He nodded and headed for the healing center. Legolas, then, picked up Herenyë and followed from behind. As he walked he noticed her ring was a different color. It turned to black. He wondered what did that mean but he ignored that as he entered into the room.
"Neumë, we were walking and she fainted." said the worried Legolas.
"Do not worry Legolas, she will be fine." she said as she reached for a towel.
Legolas nodded and sat down outside the room. Eruvadhor then joined him. They heard a gasped. They walked in and found Herenyë awake.
"Herenyë, what happened?" asked Neumë.
"I do not know."
"At least now, you are awake." said Legolas with a sigh of relieve. Eruvadhor agreed. Legolas reached for her hand to comfort her and notice the ring looked normal. He did not say anything, he was happy she was okay. He helped her down and thanked Neumë for the help. Eruvadhor then, left and went to Winyaél. Later on that day Legolas and Herenyë got ready for the celebration.
Celebrían
March 5th,2003, 06:13 AM
Hmm...what will happen next, I wonder? I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter. :)
Adunauriel
March 5th,2003, 09:34 PM
I also await the next chapter, and it's good to know my little boy has his mothers good looks...;) Not that his daddy isn't extreemly good looking too ...:grin:
Herenyë
March 6th,2003, 12:52 AM
roflmao ;) heehee
next part almost done :thumbs: heehee
Herenyë
March 7th,2003, 06:53 AM
Herenyë arrived at the Celebration. Glorfindel and Adunauriel sat besides the King for they are the reason why the celebration is taking place. For the Baby, he lays in his mothers arms. He was dressed in fine elvish clothing. It was the color of silver and made the boy's eyes so big and beautiful. The King looked so handsome, she can see where his sons gets their looks thought Herenyë with a slight giggle. Herenyë, then just waited for Legolas to arrive, she did not know what to do. Glorfindel notices and walked to her.
"Why do you stand when you can sit?" smiled Glorfindel. He looked gorgeous. His eyes shown a great pride and happiness. He worn a silver outfit that shimmered beautifully. Almost like his sons but his was more noticable.
"Well, i shall sit then." she giggled. He showed her a chair next to his.
"Why Hello Herenyë." said Adunauriel. She looked beautiful as well. Her eyes looked dazzling and showed such happiness like her husband. She had this glow that made her noticable as well. Her outfit made very gorgeous. She was wearing a white dress that was whiter then the snow on the icy mountains and it glimmered as the mid moon shine down from above.
"Hello Adunauriel. I congratulate you again on your child. He looks very handsome."
"Thank you. You look beautiful as well." she replied with a smile.
As they talked, Eruvadhor and Winyaél walked in. They looked gorgeous. Winyaél was wearing a light blue dress. When it shimmered it showed a bit of silver in it. Her hair was let down and glowed. Eruvadhor looked very handsome, he looked much more like his older brother, Legolas. He looked proud and his outfit was shining. The moon light made him look mighty. The couple walked to Glorfindel and greeted and congratulated them once again. They sat across from Herenyë.
"You look beautiful Winyaél. You look Handsome as well Eruvadhor." said Herenyë with a smile.
They talked once again, and finally the Prince came. He looked marvelous. Everyone seemed to be a bit shocked when he came in, especially Herenyë..........
Winyaél Greenleaf
March 7th,2003, 02:00 PM
Heehee... That's nice lol I wondered if you had to change any of your original plot to accomodate us (Adun and I) lol
Betcha gonna describe Legolas now. Keep it up! :thumbs:
Winyaél Greenleaf
March 7th,2003, 02:02 PM
btw, did you consider posting in this website's fanfic section? It's easier to upload stories and edit stuff there and put them in chapters. And there's a section for reviewing. And you can edit the stuff whenever you need to. Believe me, it's real useful! :thumbs:
Adunauriel
March 7th,2003, 08:17 PM
That was absolutely wonderful Herenyë.. I love the way you describe things, I can actually picture it.. Also, I can't wait to see how you describe Legolas...:thumbs:
Herenyë
March 8th,2003, 04:02 AM
Legolas *sigh* it will take a while cuz he looks so good :drool: lol.....
and what website are you talking about Win? may i know the link? lol
thanks for reading! *sigh*
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THE REUNION = Chap 6
Legolas walked towards Glorfindel to greet them. As he walked his eyes shimmered with a greyish color. His hair was shining and the moon light made it look a bit grey with blue in it. His eyes glowed. She knew that most elves glows when there is celebrations but Legolas seemed, well, more brighter, more noticable, more....like her husband. She remembered when she met Glorfindel, and he reminded her of her husband but he did not seem to have that like Legolas did. He walked with might and confidence. His outfit was silver with a touch of green. When he got closer, you notice the green glimmering as the moon light shine down on it. His outfit made him glow even more. The glow seemed to be very noticable. The color of it, well it seemed, was blue. The color matched his eyes. Finally, as he arrived to Glorfindel and Adunauriel, Herenyë could not help but smile. He greeted them and politely sat down next to Herenyë. As he sat Herenyë felt nerves. She did not understand why, but what is seems, she is starting to [I]enjoy his presences.
"You look beautiful Herenyë." he said with a smile.
"You look handsome as well Legolas."
"How do you like this Kingdom?" asked Legolas.
"I like it very much. Thank you for asking."
"After the celebration, i want to show you more of this kingdom if you do not mind." smiled widely as Legolas said.
"I do not mind. I would love to see the rest of the kingdom."
They talked for an hour then finally everyone arrived, especially someone very close to Legolas and the King.
"So, this is the Mighty Prince Legolas....where is my box?" laughed his friend.
He turned and as he saw his friend he laughed.
"Why, the box is over next to your horse Master Dwarf!"
Herenyë was shocked as she saw the dwarf. She has never seen a dwarf this close before, she heard very awful and very happy tales of them, but mostly awful tales. She heard that Dwarves are not to be trusted but she sees Legolas knows him very well, so she is okay.
"Gimli, what brings a dwarf here?" asked Legolas with happiness.
"Well, i was merely on my way to Drimrill Dale from the Shire and i decided to stop by and visit. And i have a someone else with me."
He moved aside and behide him was his former companions, Pippin and Merry.
"Im Hungry." laughed Pippin.
"Dont forget me Legolas! I am hungry as well!" laughed Merry.
"What a present! Glorfindel, remember these hobbits?"
Glorfindel turned around and saw them.
"Why! Suilad Pippin and Merry!"
"I thought you would of forgotten us!"
"Why would i have forgotten you two! You would always talk and be michevious," he said with a laugh, "and you would always eat. Where is Frodo and his Sam?"
"Sam is with his wife Rose and Frodo is with Bilbo. I do not know where they went but they did say they will be back by the 3rd nightfall."
"Well, Legolas, who is this fine young maiden?" asked Gimli.
"Gimli, this is Herenyë."
"Suilad Master Gimli." said Herenyë.
"Hello Herenyë." responded Gimli with a smile. "I havent been in these forest every since the ending of our quest. What good memories these places bring. I hope you are enjoying this Kingdom."
"I certainly am Master Dwarf." said Herenyë. She heard of this quest. She was relieved that the Ring was destroyed.
Gimli, Pippin, and Merry sat next to Legolas. As they sat the King stood up and annonced the cause of the Celebration.
"Suilad Everyone! We brought this celebration together for that we have a new member of this Kingdom." He looked at Adunauriel and she stood up holding her baby.
"Let us toast to this."
Everyone toasts to this celebration.
"This wine is surely good. I wonder if they come in pints." asked Pippin.
Legolas laughed, "Do not worry Pippin, this is not like Bree. You may have as much as you want."
As the toast ended they continue to celebrate and talk about the past about what happened to everyone........
ENJOY!
Celebrían
March 8th,2003, 06:40 AM
"Whrere is my box?" lol lol lol That's priceless!!! Keep it up! :thumbs:
Winyaél Greenleaf
March 8th,2003, 06:51 AM
The Fanfic section in this website. http://www.warofthering.net/fanfic/
Very useful. :thumbs:
It's great that Merry and Pip are in ur story! They're great comic relief! lol
Herenyë
March 8th,2003, 09:19 AM
HeeHee.....i just had to have them in there! esp Gimli! heehee thanks!
As they walked in no one really took notice of them until the maiden let her gown down. As it went down the glow of her dress got so bright everyone stopped what they were doing.
"I see you started the celebration without me" laughed the King of Gondor.
"Why, we did not know you were coming." responded King Thranduil with a smile.
"You did not get my message?" once he said this he quickly eyed Pippin.
"I must have forgotten. I was so hungry." he said with a whisper to Merry. Ever elf heard for their ears are so sensitive. The King of Gondor just laughed.
"King of Gondor and Lady of Gondor, would you want to be taken to your sits" said Legolas with a smile.
"It is okay! I shall take them!" said Merry. He quickly got out his sit and tripped over his foot. "Do not worry! I am okay!" Merry said with a blush.
"Aragorn, King of Gondor and Arwen, Lady of Gondor, You shall sit next to your former companions!" said Gimli. Herenyë felt awkward. She did not know who they are.
"We shall Master Dwarf! We shall." said Aragorn. They walked to their sits and happily started to talk to everyone.
"Who might this young maiden be?" asked Arwen.
"I am Herenyë, daughter of Galrilion."
"I am Arwen, daughter of Elrond and Queen of Gondor."
"May i say, your dress is very beautiful." said Herenyë.
"Thank you. You look beautiful too."
Once they reunited again they talked about their past, they bring up present events, and so on. They talked for hours. Then finally some elves departed, and one of those elves were Eruvadhor and Winyaél. They seemed to walk into the woods. Finally King Thranduil went up to the companions.
"Well, I have your rooms ready soon. Pippin, Merry, and Gimli, would you mind if you have one room? Or do you want all seperate ones?"
They thought about it till Pippin yelled out the answer.
"We shall share!"
"Aragorn and Arwen, your rooms are the same as before. Do you know the way there?"
"Yes we do. We thank you for the rooms and letting us come here."
"It is a pleasure. If you do not mind. I must go to my room, i am quite weary."
"We do not mind. Legolas, is it okay if we stay here and talk?" he asked with a smile.
"Of course Aragorn. Of course." he said and quickly turned to Herenyë. "Is it okay if i walk her around?"
"Okay. I think we might talk till the sun comes up." laughed Gimli.
Legolas laughed and quickly grabbed Herenyë's hand. As he grabbed her hand she felt, well, protected.They departed and started off walking to into the woods..........
Adunauriel
March 9th,2003, 03:40 AM
It's good to see the whole group has come together.. And all to see my baby boy, I feel honored... Oooohhhh, a secret walk in the woods.. I wonder what will happen......;)
Herenyë
March 9th,2003, 05:27 AM
They walked and the moon light shining down made Herenyë look mysterious. Legolas likes that. They walked and Legolas could not help but stare at her. She felt that and she turned towards his face, their eyes met. She looked into his bright blue eyes and almost fell in love again. Legolas was mesmerized by her pale blue eyes. She turned away, she felt fear going through her. He was confused but he did not want to force her to do anything that made her uncomfortable. They walked again.
"Your father's kingdom is beautiful." said Herenyë.
"Your beautiful as well, Herenyë." said Legolas. Herenyë then smiled but she seemed to stop breathing. "Herenyë?" said the prince. She fell into his arms. He was stunned. He rushed back to the kingdoms gate. As he arrived, the fellowship was still there, laughing and talking. Arwen was the first to notice that Legolas came back with Herenyë in his arm.
"Legolas, what had happen?" asked Arwen. Everyone then stopped and looked. Aragorn rushed to his side.
"She seems to have fainted. I will take her to the healing room."
"No i will take her. You must get father and ask him for Nyérenis. She is the great Healstress of this kingdom. I will await in the healing room."
Aragorn did as he was told. Everyone then went to the healing room too. Legolas arrived before everyone. As he walked in he saw Neumë.
"Neumë, she fainted once again. But it seems she stopped breathing."
She gave Legolas a confused look and went straight to Herenyë. She checked her. She gave a negative vibe.
"She seems to be breathing but with short breathe. I know what must be done."
She turned and grabbed a small needle. She stuck it into a small bottle. She took it out and faced Legolas again.
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"Gimli, do you know where the healing room is?" asked Pippin.
"I thought you knew! You told Aragorn and Arwen that you did!"
"Well..." Pippin paused.
"Uh oh." said Merry.
"Pippin!" said Gimli.
"Fool of a Took!" whispered Merry with a slight giggle.
"Do you know where the healing room is or not?" said Gimli.
"Well, i thought i did."
"So then, you do know."
"Well, i thought this was...." pippin paused, "Rivendell."
Gimli just stood there. Merry laughed.
"I know where it is!" said Merry.
Gimli and Pippin sighed in relieve.
"It is where they heal people!"
Gimli was frustrated once again.
"Merry..."
"Well lets just try to find they way." said Pippin.
"Fine."
They were off.
"Wait!"
Gimli and Merry stopped and turned back.
"i didnt finish my Pint yet!" said Pippin as he finished it all up.
Finally they were in search of the healing room.
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As Neumë was about to inject the needle in, Nyérenis arrived with Aragorn and Arwen.
"Nyérenis, thank you." said Legolas with a huge smile.
Winyaél Greenleaf
March 9th,2003, 12:27 PM
Haha!!! I love Pip and Merry!!! lol
Herenyë
March 9th,2003, 07:28 PM
Neumë seemed a bit unhappy.
"Legolas, what happened?"
"She fainted. This happened before. But she did not look this pale."
Nyérenis examined Herenyë. She gave a sign of relieve.
"She will be fine. Let us heal her." she said and gave a sign for them to exit the room. Legolas and everyone else left the room.
"I found them!" said Pippin.
Everyone turned to see who said that. Pippin walked closer.
"How is she?" he asked. Gimli and Merry arrived as well.
"I apologize that we are late."
"Do not worry Gimli. As long as you are here with them. Pippin, it seems that Herenyë will be fine. We will know once they are finished."
In the Healing Room, Nyérenis did her work.
"Neumë, hand me that needle that is on the table."
Neumë did as she told.
"What is troubling you?" asked Nyérenis as Neumë handed her the needle.
"Nothing is troubling me."
"Why do you seem unhappy?"
Neumë did not answer.
"Will she make it?"
"Yes she will. She just needs to rest once she awakes."
"I will tell Legolas and his company that she will be okay." said Neumë.
Nyérenis nodded. She injected the needle on Herenyë's arm.
"No, not yet."
Neumë stopped and turned back. She seemed a bit happy.
"What is the matter?" asked Neumë.
Celebrían
March 9th,2003, 10:38 PM
Hmm...I wonder what's afflicting poor Herenyë? :huh:
Glarawen
March 10th,2003, 02:47 AM
Herenyë i love it so far you are doing a great job! have you ever considered becoming a writer?
Celebrían
March 10th,2003, 08:05 AM
Okay Herenyë,
The part where Herenyë says that the kingdom is beautiful and then Legolas looks her in the eyes and says, "You're beautiful"...all I could think was ...MELT! Hubba, hubba! :drool:
Glarawen
March 10th,2003, 02:08 PM
Yeah it was great! J if I say anymore I will just be blubbering so I will shut up now! lol
Adunauriel
March 10th,2003, 08:41 PM
It's a great story so far... I hope everything will be ok with Herenyë, I wonder what is causing her to have these episodes... :grin:
Glarawen
March 12th,2003, 02:46 AM
maybe it is legolas...... :naughty: no the story is to good and in deph to be "totally" legolas fault...........
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ok i will quit poking fun.... sorry
Herenyë
March 13th,2003, 06:07 AM
lol
here it goes
When she asked she seemed a bit brighter. Nyérenis pondered.
"The needle seemed not to give the medicine."
Neumë nodded.
"There is nothing we can do?" asked Neumë.
"Yes there is, but we must be careful. Do not tell the prince. It seemed, well how should i put this, someone tried to poison her, what could of happened?"
Neumë started to think. She looked at Herenyë's ring, it was a dark black.
"Her ring is beautiful." said Neumë. She took the ring off.
gasped.
"Herenyë? Get the prince and tell him." said Nyérenis.
Neumë was upset but she went for the prince.
"Legolas, Herenyë is fine. She is awake. You may see her."
"Thank you Neumë." he walked to her and he saw in her hand the ring. "May i have that ring?." Neumë nodded and gave him the ring. He walked in and kissed her hand in relieve. The others followed and gave Herenyë a greeting for coming back. Pippin was happy that he felt, well not hungry. "Here is your ring Herenyë" said Legolas with a smile.
"Thank you Legolas."
Neumë walked out.
Glarawen
March 13th,2003, 05:47 PM
Bravo! Oncore! (is that how you spel it?) Great! I love it
Celebrían
March 13th,2003, 08:33 PM
Good job! So, (forgive me here, if I am totally dense) the ring was poisoning her? :huh:
Adunauriel
March 13th,2003, 08:47 PM
That's been my thought all along.. Somethings not right about that ring....:thumbs:
Celebrían
March 13th,2003, 08:52 PM
: "Twilight Zone theme" playing in the background: Yeah, what's the deal with this ring? I guess we'll have to wait and see.......
Glarawen
March 13th,2003, 10:56 PM
Oh really I thought that the ring was like a hairloom of her kingdom and since the kingdom was destroyed it was taking energy out of her :huh: maybe i am just weird! lol
Celebrían
March 13th,2003, 11:01 PM
Hmm....perhaps, and no, that's not "totally weird" :)
Herenyë
March 14th,2003, 05:14 AM
"Herenyë, i was really worried!" said Pippin and he gave her a hug.
"Thank You Pippin." she smiled.
Legolas was really happy and smiled. Everyone celebrated about her waking up. Finally the 'party' ended and they departed to bed. Legolas and Herenyë did not.
"Legolas, I have something to tell you." said Herenyë, she paused but she knew she must tell him. "The kingdom i was from, was attacked by Orcs, Goblins, and Uruk Hais. They killed everyone besides me."
Legolas sighed.
"My family, my husband, my friends all died. Could this be the answer to my fainting?"
"I do not know. I am sorry." he grabbed her and hugged her. Them suddenly they heard something.
"Shhh." said Legolas. He helded Herenyë closer. He was examining the area. Finally Herenyë sighed and whispered. "I see who it is." Legolas paused. "Who is it?" In response Herenyë said. "Neumë."
=P
Celebrían
March 14th,2003, 06:16 AM
Who is Neumë? Now why did you have to cut us off there? mecry . I want to know the deal about this ring! :)
Adunauriel
March 14th,2003, 11:45 PM
Oh, do I sence a little jealousy comeing from the direction of Neumë..... Ok well I do...... I hope she doesn't do anything that could put Herenyës life into danger....:(
Glarawen
March 15th,2003, 12:29 AM
Bravo yet again!!!!! you are always cutting it off!!! lol that is a good thing though, i leaves me thinking......
Herenyë
March 15th,2003, 04:42 AM
Legolas held Herenyë closer then ever. He remembered the first time he met Neumë. She was beautiful, tall, slim, shiny golden hair, pale grey eyes, but he seemed not to like her the way she does.
"Shhh. Ill take you to Besseth. We can hide there." whispered Legolas with a slight giggle. They walked quickly and they finally arrived. Up they went. As they sat on the tree truck Legolas drew Herenyë to his chest.
"The scenery is beautiful from up here." said Herenyë. She remembered her first time in a tree with her husband, her heart ached.
"Herenyë, i am sorry for your loss. What confuses me is why did it happen. Our kingdom suffered as well a century ago in a battle against the Uruk-Hai. We, too, do not know why they had attacked. We were not prepared for the battle. I lost my older brother, Hîrvagol. He was a great warrior and was the heir of the throne." he drew to silence. They were in each other's arms but they were quiet. They felt loneliness inside, thou they had each other. Then their eyes met and it seemed to draw each other closer then finally, their lips met. Herenyë pulled away. She enjoyed it but she felt upset. She still loved her husband, but the feelings inside her for Legolas seemed to get stronger by the second. She was confused once again. Legolas looked puzzled but he understood.
"I am sorry Herenyë. I did not mean for that too happen." He drew away and was quiet.
"No, No. It is my fault." she said. She drew quiet and seemed to have fallen a sleep on the truck. Legolas noticed and held her closer.
"Well, it is okay. I enjoy your company." he whispered in her ear.
In the bushes, Neumë watched. In her mind she thought It should happen soon with a smirk on her face.
Celebrían
March 15th,2003, 06:17 AM
That last line kinda sounds like Gollum at the end of TT! "We could let Her do it"..... creepy stuff!!! :o
Celebrían
March 15th,2003, 06:21 AM
*hits self* Duh! Silly me! How could I miss Neumë? I shouldn't have read that when I was so sleepy!
Glarawen
March 16th,2003, 03:50 AM
ohhhh i am still kinda clueless......... lol i am just going to wait
Adunauriel
March 16th,2003, 04:19 AM
Absolutely great Herenyë, I can't wait to read what Neumë has got up her sleeve... I just hope she doesn't get to pull it off....:grin:
Herenyë
March 20th,2003, 02:03 AM
They got off the tree. Legolas, like a perfect gentlemen, helped Herenyë off.
"Thank you Legolas."
Legolas nodded and held her hand as they walked back. Neumë followed them. She watched them carefully. She watched them as they hugged and talked. They arrived to the gates peacefully.
"Herenyë, do you want me to accompany you to your room?"
"If you may, i would like that." she replied with a smile. As they walked Legolas slowly grabbed her hand. She felt quite happy. Legolas smiled. They reached her room.
"Thank you Legolas." she said while looking into his eyes.
"Your welcome." replied the Prince. He leaned in and she took the hint and they kissed. Once they released, he left and Herenyë walked in to her room. She dressed for her sleep. She was confused, very confused. She liked Legolas but was it possible for her to love him after what had happened to her husband? She did not know what to do. Then she decided to sleep on it. As she slept, someone was watching her.
Glarawen
March 20th,2003, 02:22 AM
OHHHHHHHHH bravo! :hooray: i LOVE that passage!
Adunauriel
March 20th,2003, 09:08 PM
Uh oh, a possibly unwanted watcher.. I have a bad feeling someone is most definately going to try to hurt Herenyë....:mmmm:
Celebrían
March 20th,2003, 10:21 PM
Oh my! :o I can't wait to see what happens next!
Herenyë
March 23rd,2003, 05:44 AM
Herenyë was running, as if someone was chasing her. She looked back and saw that no one was there. She was confused. She, then, decided to find a shelter. She walked and she found a cave. She entered with a bit of fear, the cave brought back a painful memory. She walked deeper into the cave and she found a boat. It was rather small, it seemed it can only fit a hobbit. The boat seemed to lure her closer. Then, finally, she reached the boat. She stepped into the boat with some difficulty until she noticed the boat stretched out. She was surprise. The boat moved on its own, as if it had a mind of its own. It traveled through beautiful scenry. All of a sudden the boat stopped. It stopped infront of a tree that seemed quite old and she got a feeling that it is full anger and sorrow. She walked closer and investigated. She looked at the tree and felt the bark. Then, something jumped or fell down. She was startled and walked back. She walked to where the sound was and she found her husband. He moved and faced Herenyë. She ran to him and kissed him. He then pulled away and whispered to her ears "It is possible." He disappeared. She was shocked with his last words and his disappearance. She decided to walk back to the boat. As she walked closer to the boat, the boat moved farther. She tried to get to the boat, but it seemed impossible. She was frustrated and sat down on the floor. She laid on the floor and she heard a foot step. She looked and she saw Eruvadhor. He was deeply injured. His eyes were bloodshot red. His hands were scratched up and his nose was bleeding. She was shocked with his injuries. She had never seen that on a elf before. She came to his aid and she tried to help him. He fell to the ground. She kneeled down and put his head on her knees. She was covered with his blood. She whispered to his ear, "Do not worry, i am here to help you." He laughed. His laugh was not pleasant. He got up and pulled his sword. He placed it to his neck and slit his throat. "NO!!!!," screamed Herenyë. She started to cry. Then boat came back to her. She was happy and she got Eruvadhors body and wanted to place him in it. But the boat came with something else. It had a dress. The dress looked familiar. She thought of it until she found out who had that dress. It was Neumë. She dropped Eruvadhors body. She was distrubed and was a waken. She was sweating and was happy to realize that it was a dream. She was curious if her husband answered her question. She was also curious of the meaning of her dream.
Adunauriel
March 23rd,2003, 11:58 PM
A very interesting addition Hezzy, it has most definately left me wondering....:mmmm:
Glarawen
March 24th,2003, 02:09 AM
ahhhhhhhhhhh weird! it will keep me guessing!
Herenyë
March 24th,2003, 07:06 AM
The watcher watched from the window and smiled at the results. It seemed as if the watcher knew that it was going to happen. The watcher jumped down from the tree and walked closer to the window. Herenyë decided to go back to sleep and hoped that she will sleep peacefully. The watcher got even closer until she reached the window. Herenyë fell right back to sleep and the watcher slide herself in through the window. Before Herenyë went to bed, she left the window opened. The watcher was so slick that even Herenyë or any other elves can hear. The watcher reached to its pouch and took something out that seemed to be a needle. The needle was extremely thin. The watcher also took out a little jar and stuck the needle in it. The watcher took it out and it was dripping. Well, it seems that i have gotten a little too much. This will hurt even more then. whispered the watcher to itself. The watcher finally reached to the bed and saw that Herenyë was peacefully a sleep. good the watcher whispered. The watcher slightly grabbed her arm. "Neumë?" startled Herenyë. She was a woken. Neumë, being shocked, quickly stuck in the needle and Herenyë feel right back to sleep. "It is me" said Neumë unpleasantly.
Adunauriel
March 24th,2003, 11:01 PM
I knew I didn't like Neumë, and now I know why... I hope they get her before she does something really terrible to Herenyë....:mmmm:
Celebrían
March 24th,2003, 11:57 PM
Okay, now I'm really sucked into this story! The section about the dream was really great! I'm very intrigued..... :)
Glarawen
March 26th,2003, 02:49 AM
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhhhh u ALWAYS cut it off!!!! i hate guessing cause i have ZERO patients.................
Herenyë
April 12th,2003, 09:30 AM
been gone too long ... i feel so bad right now ... i think you have to wait longer ... sorry :(
Adunauriel
April 13th,2003, 12:23 AM
It's Ok Hezzy, just post when you get the chance....:thumbs:
Celebrían
April 13th,2003, 04:14 AM
No worries, hon. I know it will be worth the wait! ;)
Herenyë
April 14th,2003, 09:51 AM
The next day arrived. *sigh* Herenyë woke up. She notice the sunlight was bright, she quickly got out of bed and freshen up. She got dressed and walked outside. So beautiful out here she thought to herself. She walked to the palace and notice the hobbits already enjoying their breakfast outside in the patio.
"Good Morning Herenyë," said Pippin as a piece of lembas drops from his mouth, "Pardon me." he replied with a smile.
"Good old Pippin eating like a pig. He needs to learn how to eat with manner," said Merry as he quickly drinks the fresh water from his mug, "Im the clean eater."
"Good Morning Pippin and Good Morning Merry." she replied back with a smile. As she walked inside the palace she sees Legolas going down the stairs.
"Good Morning Prince Legolas," she said with a smile,"Where might a Prince be going in such a hurry?"
"Suilad Herenyë. I am meeting with my Father in the healing room."
Herenyë nodded and continued to walk.
"Herenyë," said the Prince, "Do you want to join us? We are going to have breakfast there. I would like it if you join us."
"Certainly."
They walked together. They past the hobbits. They were still talking about how mannered Merry is and how Pippin eats like a pig.
("Pippin, I think your ... "
"Merry, i wonder what we are going to have for afternoon snack."
Pippin said interrupting Merry.
"I dont know Pip. I think i would like Lembas if we have a choice."
"If i could chose Merry, i would like chicken. Mmmm Chicken.")
Legolas walked in a bit of a rush but Herenyë manage to keep up. She was curious in why he seemed to be in a hurry for if she was invited to go. It seemed a bit awkward.
"Legolas, what is the occation of this meeting? Are you sure it is alright that i am prescent there?"
"Certainly Herenyë. I would not of invited you if it was right for you to be there."
she smiled and they continued to walk. They finally reached to the healing room. Legolas let himself in and Herenyë followed. As she entered, Nëume was there. She looked very suspicous.
"Hello Legolas and Herenyë." said the King. ....
Celebrían
April 14th,2003, 10:28 PM
What is this meeting about, I wonder? I can't wait to find out! ;)
Adunauriel
April 14th,2003, 10:58 PM
Ah a meeting with Nëume there, maybe they'll get her far all the bad things she's done....:thumbs:
Glarawen
April 17th,2003, 02:40 AM
ah i like it
Herenyë
April 25th,2003, 12:59 AM
Legolas sat next to his father while Herenyë sat across from him. Nëume stood and was preparing tea for the guest in the room.
"Legolas, i have something for you to do." he said as he looked out the window.
"What is it you need me to do?"
"Excuse me Lord, here is your tea."
"Nëume, would you mind making Herenyë and me tea?"
Nëume nodded.
"Legolas, i need you to go to Rivendell. I have a letter for Lord Elrond."
Lord Elrond? thought Herenyë. I must speak to him as well. I wonder if Legolas would let me go with him.
"Yes father. May i ask, what does this letter contain?"
"Something concerning our friend." He said with a smile. "Herenyë, would you mind if you go on this quest with Legolas? I heard you needed to speak to Lord Elrond as well."
"I certainly do need to speak with him. Thank you for offering Lord."
"Legolas, i will have everything ready by nightfall. Get ready to head tonight. That is all i had to say."
"Thank you Father."
"Thank you Lord."
Nëume did not seem happy about what she had heard.
Lets just hope she doesnt do anything thats regretful ;)
Celebrían
April 25th,2003, 04:34 AM
Let's hope! :o Do I detect some foreshadowing? Good job, Hezzy. ;)
Glarawen
April 27th,2003, 04:12 AM
i detect much jealously here :mmmm: not good! good job Hezzie!
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