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Beleglotiel
April 17th,2003, 03:09 AM
Aww, thanks, well I'll see if I can :thumbs:

Here's s'more :grin:

Chapter 26

A simple query

A week flew by and Legolindë’s strength increased and her injuries healed. She was not at her full strength, however. There were times when she would go on walks through the lovely gardens of Mirkwood to regain her strength, with Eithor as her escort. They talked about many things. Eithor would affectionately kiss her hand now and then, or give her a gentle kiss on the cheek or lips. Legolindë welcomed these displays of affection with open arms. She loved Eithor and Eithor loved her; this they both knew without question. No one, save Imbethoiniel, knew of their love. It was a surprise to them that nobody had seen them in the gardens. In the gardens, where flowers bloomed, their love bloomed as well. In addition to walks, they would go riding together, leaving the trouble the orcs had laid on Middle-Earth behind.

King Thranduil was making preparations to send word to all places in Middle-Earth. All must be told of the danger that they faced. He summoned the groups of soldiers he knew had quick horses so that the messages could be delivered swiftly. Eithor knew he would be called upon to go on one of these missions; it was merely a matter of time before Thranduil got around to asking him. But first, there was something he needed to ask Thranduil.

It was a beautiful afternoon that day and Eithor stepped into Legolindë’s room quickly. She was practicing with her sword, make believing an invisible opponent.

“Is my swordsmanship getting better?” she asked stopping momentarily as Eithor entered.

“You should not be practicing. Legolindë, you know better. You’re not at one hundred percent,” Eithor smirked slightly, “you might hurt yourself,” he winked at her and took the blade from her.

“If the only reason you came her was to lecture me, then you can leave the same way you came in,” Legolindë pretended to be angry and turned her back to him. Eithor smiled and grabbed the sheathe that was propped up against one of the posts of the bed, slid the sword into it, and laid it on the bed. He came up behind her and wrapped her in his arms.

“No, actually, that’s not why I came,” he began, “I came to ask you where your grandfather was. I already looked in the Great Hall,” Legolindë stroked one of his hands that lay across her shoulder.

“I’d imagine that he’s in his room. That would be the obvious place,” she teased. Eithor grinned.

“Now, why didn’t I think of that?” Legolindë opened her mouth to say something but Eithor stopped her, “Don’t answer that,” she smiled playfully.

“Why do you want to know where Grandfather is?” questioned Legolindë.

“I need to ask him something,” Eithor turned to leave and was halfway out the door when he stopped and looked back, “One more thing. Meet me at the fountain in the back in about five to ten minutes,” Legolindë nodded curiously as he left her room.

Eithor walked down the long hall until he came to the King and Queen’s bedroom. He knocked boldly.

“Come in,” answered a voice on the other side of the door. Eithor turned the knob and entered the ornamented room. There was a large shelf full of books of lore and history and many appealing decorations that caught Eithor’s eye. Thranduil sat near the window, using the rays of the sun for a suitable reading light. He looked up and his serious face brightened as he saw Eithor coming in, “Ah! Eithor, what a pleasure!” he greeted, “Come, have a seat,” Thranduil motioned to two chairs that stood on opposite sides of a small, circular, cream-colored table. The King had a little store of wine and goblets in his room for his pleasure and took two highly decorated goblets and poured into them a crimson wine. With the goblets in hand, he sat in the chair across from Eithor and presented him with one of the glasses. Eithor received it with thanks and took a modest sip. “Eithor, I’m glad you’re here. I was meaning to speak with you,” began King Thranduil, “I need a strong, brave, dependable man with a swift horse to venture to a few Dwarven cities. You have all of those things, so I must ask you if you would be willing to do this for me,” Eithor’s hopes crumbled before him. But there was still a way.

“Of course, Highness, but when would I leave?” he asked.

“As soon as possible. Preferably tomorrow or the day after, at the latest,” informed the King. Eithor knew he did not do it on purpose, but Thranduil had dashed his plans. His heart sank to the bottom of his stomach. “Now what was it you came to see me for,” continued Thranduil.

“Uh…it’s not important,” Eithor faltered.

“Nonsense, of course it is! There is so much that you have done for me. If there is anything you would have me do, I would gladly do it for you.” Eithor’s eyes drifted to the door. He mustered up all his courage; this was something that he knew he must do. He stared into the eyes of the King.

“Would you grant me your granddaughter’s hand in marriage?”

Next chapter coming soon……………

Astaliel
April 17th,2003, 03:37 AM
Oooo! getten' better! Can't wait for the next bit! Kepp up the good work! :thumbs:

Amoraq
April 17th,2003, 04:08 AM
Oooh wow! :thumbs:

That was great. You left us at a cliffhanger Bele!!!

Nefatariel
April 17th,2003, 04:19 AM
Keep writing, its great! Can't wait to read more!

Beleglotiel
April 17th,2003, 01:18 PM
I love leaving you guys like that :thumbs: I enjoy seeing you wait in anxious toil *rubs hands evilly* MUHAHAHA!! :wicked:

Dawnnamira Nerwen
April 17th,2003, 08:57 PM
Now Bele, you know how much I hate cliffhangers...

And you had to go in and put one right there!

Okay, indulge me...go ahead and post again soon!

Amoraq
April 17th,2003, 10:34 PM
Evil, evil Bele! :nono:

lol

Beleglotiel
April 17th,2003, 10:42 PM
Hey, there's a weekend coming up :thumbs: Should be able to post more...............and I'm already thinking up stuff for another fanfic :grin: tho it won't be anything relating to my recent ones.........but that's subject to change at a moments notice ;)

Amoraq
April 17th,2003, 10:44 PM
Great!!! I can't wait for more. When you write your next fanfic you have to tell us where it is! :)

Adunauriel
April 17th,2003, 11:07 PM
I knew he would ask for her hand.. Now for Thranduils' responce, and I'm thinking it's going to be another shocker.. That good kind I hope....:thumbs:

Telyhandoiel
April 18th,2003, 12:56 AM
I said I was sorry about what I said about your drawing and meant it. I feel terrible that I made you feel so bad. I heard that friends always told friends the truth. I also heard a friend would always forgive a friend for anything.(Does that mean you were never really my friend:( .)And I also heard from you today that the truth hurts, and I'm sorry it hurt you so much.
Oh yeah.Love your story so far, can't wait for the next chap.!
Sorry everyone for taking up so much room. She won't listen to me in class.
I think you might delete this Bele,so....okay.

Beleglotiel
April 18th,2003, 03:26 AM
I PMed you Tely

Chapter 27

The answers

Thranduil sat back in his chair and swished the wine around in his goblet, taking in the question which was just asked of him.

“This is unexpected,” was all the King could say. He stared into Eithor’s patient and hopeful eyes, “You love her?” he asked calmly.

“Yes,” replied Eithor.

“And she loves you?”

“Yes,” he repeated.

“How do you know this? I have not seen any special relationship between Legolindë and yourself. How am I supposed to believe this?”

“Well…” Eithor considered relaying to him all the ‘significant’ events that had happened between the two of them. He made up his mind and told the King everything: the time at the river, on the journey to Dol-Guldur when he had told her of his affections and what happened, the things that had been going on recently, and much more. King Thranduil was slightly taken aback by how many things had happened without his knowing.

“Eithor……I must ask you a serious question,” he paused with a stern look on his face, “That night……on your passage to Dol-Guldur……did you…”

“No, Highness,” Eithor answered quickly. Thranduil nodded.

“Now that that’s settled,” he grunted, “Eithor, you are a noble and honorable man with a spirited heart. But,” he paused, “I do not approve of your courting, Legolindë without my permission,” Eithor’s shoulders drooped slightly and he lowered his head, “However,” continued Thranduil, “I have tried to spoil the bonds of true love before,” his thoughts went to Legolas and Beleglotiel, “And I have learned my lesson well………You have my approval and my blessings,” He beamed at his granddaughter’s future husband, that is if she said ‘yes’. Eithor stood up with a broad smiling beaming from his face.

“Thank you, Highness,” he said graciously. Thranduil rose.

“There is no need for you to address me like that anymore. We’re practically family now,” smiled Thranduil.

“Yes, of course. Thank you again, Thranduil. I must ask Legolindë; she’s waiting for me,” and Eithor headed for the door.

“Eithor,” Thranduil called and he stopped, “Will you still be going on this mission for me? I dearly hate to break you apart from Legolindë at such a delicate time, but this is something that you and I both know must be done,”

“Yes, I will go tomorrow,” Eithor sighed, “she won’t like it, but it gives us both something to look forward to upon my return,” and with this, Eithor left to meet Legolindë at the fountain.

He hurried out the back door and went into the garden where the fountain stood. There, he saw Legolindë, sitting on the side of the fountain, caressing her fingers across the surface of the pool. She looked up when she saw him coming. Legolindë stood and greeted him with a light kiss on his cheek. Eithor motioned for her to sit and he sat beside her. He faced Legolindë and held her hands in his. The garden, which had few trees, allowed the light to shine down upon them. The light made an eye-catching glare in Legolindë’s beautiful eyes and illuminated her lovely blue dress that matched her eyes. Eithor couldn’t help but admire her radiance and beauty. They sat momentarily in silence. Just being in each other’s presence made them more than happy. But, Eithor broke the silence.

“I spoke with your grandfather,” he said.

“You never told me what about?” Legolindë pointed out.

“Yes…umm….which brings me too this question,” Eithor fumbled over his words. Suddenly, there was a lump in his throat and he couldn’t bring himself to ask her.

“Yes?” asked Legolindë patiently. Eithor swallowed hard and let the words leave his lips.

“Legolindë, daughter of Legolas and Beleglotiel……….will you marry me?” There was a long pause as Legolindë’s face expressed absolute shock. Her jaw dropped and her eyes became wide. Eithor wasn’t sure if this was a good sign or a bad sign and quickly recovered. “You would make me the happiest person to live. Legolindë, I love you so much, none could compare their love to the love that I have for you,” he continued. There was still silence from Legolindë, so Eithor persisted, “I love everything about you. Your hair, your eyes, your lips…” he paused and said softly, “your body,” Legolindë remained speechless. Eithor felt like digging a hole and crawling into it, covering himself in the dirt and never coming out. Just then, Legolindë wrapped her arms around his neck in an unusually tight hug. Eithor could hear her crying, but was not sure if they were tears of joy or tears of sadness. He embraced her despite the things he didn’t know. She cried and whimpered not daring to let go of Eithor. Then, there was the softest, meekest, sound that anyone could ever hear. It said…

“Yes,” Her answer was so soft, Eithor barely heard it. He pulled her away to look at her. Her sapphire eyes were glistening with tears, but her lips were graced with a smile.

“What?” he asked somewhat doubting what he thought he had heard.

“YES!” shouted Legolindë happily. She embraced Eithor again and lunged toward him so forcefully, she knocked him and herself into the pool of the fountain. There was a splash as the two plunged into the cool water, but they didn’t seem to notice. They kissed under the water and cared not for where they were or what a comical situation they had made of it. All they knew was that they would spend eternity together in happiness and in love, and that was all that mattered.

Eithor sat up out of the fountain and brought Legolindë up with him. The two were soaked from their heads to their waists.

“Do you really mean it, Legolindë?” he asked making sure that he wasn’t dreaming.

“Of course, Eithor! I loved you from the moment I saw you when you saved me from that wicked man!” Legolindë explained. Eithor grinned, but then remembered the mission he had to go on.

‘This is surely going to put a damper on things, but if she really loves me, which I’m positive she does, she will wait for me,’ thought Eithor, “Legolindë, there is something I must tell you, and I know you won’t like it,”

“Anything, my love,” replied Legolindë willing to take on anything and everything.

“When I asked Thranduil for your hand, he asked me if I would go on a mission for him,”

“What kind of a mission?” she questioned with a little less enthusiasm.

“He needs me to go journey to some Dwarven cities and tell them of the orcs’ deeds,” he informed, “I must leave tomorrow and I know not when I shall return. The safety of so many people depends on me. I must do this. I hope you understand my obligation,” Legolindë lowered her head and looked at the ground.

“I understand,” she answered softly.

“But you’ll wait for me, won’t you?” Eithor asked raising her chin up to face him.

“I would wait an eternity for you,” Legolindë reassured him. Eithor and Legolindë kissed passionately. This kiss was the most passionate anyone could ever dream to experience. What lay down the path for this Elf couple……only the Valar can tell……




*or you can just read the epilogue* ;) :thumbs:

Beleglotiel
April 18th,2003, 03:27 AM
Epilogue

Eithor went on his mission accompanied by his father and brought home word. One third of the Dwarf population had been killed by the poison. All the other Elves returned from their missions. In the end, about 1000 Rohirrim, 2000 Gondorians, 1700 Dwarves, 50 Hobbits (because the poison had not been distributed in that area), died in addition to a total of 4000 other people who were of various other classifications. With the help of Galadriel and Elrond, Thranduil was able to devise a cure that would eliminate the poison from the water.

Not long after Eithor’s arrival and Middle-Earth was returned to normal, he and Legolindë were married. They led a romantic and happy life together. Ten years after their marriage, Legolindë gave birth to an auburn haired hazel eyed baby boy named Elvar who looked very much like his father. Five years later, they were graced with a light brown haired blue eyed daughter named, Fiondra, and she, in turn, looked like her mother. Later on, about ten more years, another son came to them. This son had blonde hair and blue eyes and looked so much like Legolas that it was hard to realize that this babe was the deceased Elf’s grandson, rather than Legolas himself. The boy was named after his grandfather. The three children’s great-grandfather was extremely proud of his great-grandchildren and spoiled them with many gifts, but the children did not become greedy in any sense.

Imbethoiniel and Isarandel decided to move to the Woodland Realm so that they could be closer to their family.

Tarania married a handsome young Elf named, Til-Galdur, and they had twin daughters, Tánia and Tilàia.

Pheradë and his wife, Nilmandra (who was not mentioned in the story), had a son later on which they named, Hallas.

Thranduil and Arnoviel could not have been happier with their family growing. After all the bad that had happened, the good was ten times better.

Middle-Earth lived on in peace and tranquility forever and ever……as far as this story goes.




There you have it. I hope you enjoyed my story. Thanks for reading!!

Elvenwanderer
April 18th,2003, 03:34 AM
that was awesome Bele!! Very good!! I'm sorry to see it end though.... can't wait to read your next one!

Amoraq
April 18th,2003, 03:34 AM
That was absolutely beautiful Bele! :thumbs:

I can hardly believe it's over already. mecry

Write more!!!

Beleglotiel
April 18th,2003, 01:08 PM
Thank you :grin: I'm glad you liked it. Now I just have to give my readers at school the ending..........

I just hope you guys aren't disappointed that I didn't go on with it and tell what happened on Eithor's mission. But, I wanted to let you guys use your imaginations and think something up. You're all intelligent people ;) :thumbs:

Dawnnamira Nerwen
April 18th,2003, 05:43 PM
It's over?

What!?!? It can't be over...

...and yet it is.

Great story Bele!

Adunauriel
April 18th,2003, 11:26 PM
I know I can't believe it's over wither.. I hope you'll write more for us Bele.. Your stories are amazing, filled with love, and action.. They keep me comeing back everyday to see if you've updated.. Please write another story soon....:grin:

Beleglotiel
April 19th,2003, 01:56 AM
Well, the wheels are turning and turning in my little head. I'll try to come up with something soon :thumbs: I have had some ideas of going in a different direction with a story......such as a maybe a present day type of story......or if you guys perfer a LOTR based story, that's cool too ;) i've got some other ideas that are LOTR based, too :thumbs:

Nefatariel
April 19th,2003, 02:36 AM
Wow I really enjoyed reading this fic. You got me hooked onto your wriitng. I must say that you have a great talent for writing. I do hope to see more of your writing! Such beauty the way you describe the characters , amazing!

Lhuntidomion
April 19th,2003, 03:00 AM
DO ANOTHER ONE!! AND READ MINE!! YOU PROMISED!!

Amoraq
April 19th,2003, 03:23 AM
Do Another Bele!!! And it doesn't matter what subject you choose to do it on...I;m sure you'll be able to make a good story of it no matter what! :thumbs:

Beleglotiel
April 19th,2003, 05:48 PM
Thanks, I will, I've got a story in my head already :thumbs: but it's not about Elves mind you ;)

:rolleyes: Lhun, calm down, I haven't gotten to it yet........chill okay!

Aldalaire
April 20th,2003, 02:55 AM
Great job, Bele!!!! I can't believe it's over already! Your an excellent writer, Bele. Keep up the good work!

Beleglotiel
April 20th,2003, 11:06 PM
Thank you, thank you! :grin:

Well, I started my next fanfic.......it's called Lost and Found, so go check it out :thumbs: ;)

Kenzie
April 20th,2003, 11:53 PM
yes you really must write another!!! this one was as good maybe even better than the first!!! i loved it!! loved it alll!!!

Narisunell
June 3rd,2003, 07:12 AM
loved it, bele, loved it! ok, my fave part...

was when Eithor asked Thranduil if he could ask Legolinde the Big Question. :) that was so sweet! and i imagine it would have taken a lot of courage... that part was written beautifully. one second i thought he would say yes, the next no, and finally yes!

very bril, Bele!

Beleglotiel
June 6th,2003, 04:07 PM
Thanks, Narisunell :grin:

Narisunell
June 7th,2003, 06:32 AM
yup, no prob. it's nuthin less than the truth! :grin: