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Lady Ashley
August 12th,2002, 07:30 PM
More poems...one poem, or two, however you view it.


I sing of a gentle breeze
Floating over golden mallorn leaves
In Lorien of the Blossom.

Dear Lorien! O Lorien!
When shall I see you again?
Shall I visit thee
Before I cross the Sea?

Nessa the Dancer
August 12th,2002, 08:15 PM
Wonderful! I love the image of the breeze floating over the mallorn leaves.
I can hear it in the word 'breeze' and I can almost see it. You really are a fantastic poet.

Lady Ashley
August 13th,2002, 04:47 PM
Thanks...you're too kind.