May Thou Remember...

[Lady Ashley]

May thou always remember home
Wherever thou may roam
Somewhere under star
In night-dark lands afar.

May thou think of light
In the dark night
So far from home
In a place few have known.

May thy swords never fall
May thy bows never break
So go one, go all,
You know what’s at stake!

[Nessa the Dancer]

That's great Ashley. Can I ask why you changed the rhyming scheme in the last verse?

[Lady Ashley]

...because I felt like it? My poems hardly ever stay in the same rhyming sceme throughout the entire thing...mostly because sometimes I can't think of a good way to word it with good rhyming and such. :grin: lol

(believe me, two of my other poems are even worse for that. lol)

But thanks!

[Nessa the Dancer]

That's fair enough I supose, some of my poems don't rhyme at all because I get so carried away with the subject that I don't think about rhyming.

[Tillia_hobbitlass]

ASHELY!!! IT'S TILLY!!! Hullo!!
Ashely:No........
Bwahaha Yes I have found you!!!!
Okay enough of that......Wonderful poem!! Of corse I love all of your poems and stories so.....
Okay I am off again. Wonderful see you soon!!

[Elentari]

Glad to be reading more of your poetry, Ashley! I know what you mean abot trying to write in a 'box'; while I enjoy rhyme and meter, I would advise never to sacrifice content for form.
Looking forward to more from your pen! :grin:

[Lady Ashley]

Thanks guys. Y'all are too nice. I sure hope I can write more! *laugh*

[Galadriel]

a very good peom