Another of mine

[A Highland Child]

Finally
Love has come upon
History
Of a world long gone

Busily
Undertake the memory
Memory
Shall fade verily

Live alone to the end of time
I have missed every stop sign
Time myself but in no mind
To listen to reason
Loathe what is there to find
Enemies are right

Busily
Overtake the memory
Yesterday
Stale as today

[Elfdaughter]

Hey, that's good! Thought provoking - I like the second to last stanza:

Live alone to the end of time
I have missed every stop sign
Time myself but in no mind
To listen to reason
Loathe what is there to find
Enemies are right

Well done! I don't often like modern style poems like that, so for you to have written one I like, obviously says something about your talent.

(p.s. Welcome to WOTR!)

[Eledhwen]

Wonderful poem! :rose: I have to echo ED - you are very talented! (Love your sig too, btw!)

[Lady Ashley]

Very deep and lovely!