Deagol and Smeagol

[thehobbitelf]

There once lived a hobbit named Deagol
He was killed by his best friend Smeagol
All because he found a ring
I bet he hated that stupid thing!

There once was a hobbit named Smeagol
He killed his best friend Deagol
All over a stupid ring
He really cherished the pretty thing!

Hehe... it's not very long, but it was in my head at the moment:D:lol:evilcool::rolleyes:

[Illuvatar]

Good one, thanks for the lol ....

and welcome to our little corner of the world.....

Illu

[thehobbitelf]

he he thanks:D :lol:

[tosca]

lol. does the poetry have to be about LotR??

[tosca]

anger!!! i want to WRITE LOL.

[Illuvatar]

This is a Tolkien site,
But I'm not one to take the topic light.
So if your a poet,
and you THINK you know it!
Then step on up to the plate,
And show it! :p :p :p

[Gil-Galad]

I think that later i will. You have inspired me, Illuvy!

[WinterSoul]

GOOD ONE thehobbitelf

I enjoyed it dearly and had a lol !

entdraught

[tosca]

yes...okay then. thanks. lol

[Gil-Galad]

I thought it was quite good myself

[PrinceImrahil]

Good job both thehobbitelf and Illuvy!